for How Can This Be6/25/2007 c1 
72angel953
wow. i dont know what else to say other than we all feel like this at times...((yes even me))((lol))
c ya later y blah blah blah ur friend angel953
72angel953wow. i dont know what else to say other than we all feel like this at times...((yes even me))((lol))
c ya later y blah blah blah ur friend angel953
4/19/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
Powerful poem. It asks questions I ask all the time. Well done. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Powerful poem. It asks questions I ask all the time. Well done. Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
3/27/2007 c1 44Alyosha Karamazov
deeply sad material here, left me with a sort of echoing emptiness, an abyss of desperate questions.Very powerful. well done.
44Alyosha Karamazovdeeply sad material here, left me with a sort of echoing emptiness, an abyss of desperate questions.Very powerful. well done.
2/25/2007 c1 46antigonelives
I like how you speak through the narrator, and if it's real, then I understand. This isn't my kind of poetry (which would be seepingly tragic archaicisms of things), but you really were speaking through this and I admire that.
~Christie
46antigonelivesI like how you speak through the narrator, and if it's real, then I understand. This isn't my kind of poetry (which would be seepingly tragic archaicisms of things), but you really were speaking through this and I admire that.
~Christie
2/22/2007 c1 54the unreal
nice to see your poems again,
havent been on here for a while...
maybe because im trying to avoid writing
because i dont know whats going to come out?
well written, except the last line i dont undersatnd. did you write it wrong?
i suggest you come over on saturday or sunday (3 or 4th)
because i miss you!
54the unrealnice to see your poems again,
havent been on here for a while...
maybe because im trying to avoid writing
because i dont know whats going to come out?
well written, except the last line i dont undersatnd. did you write it wrong?
i suggest you come over on saturday or sunday (3 or 4th)
because i miss you!
2/19/2007 c1 Trisha
Fuck life's shit, much rather live for my highs.
I'm chemically unbalanced, it sucks.
Wow, I don't know why I said that.
Fuck life's shit, much rather live for my highs.
I'm chemically unbalanced, it sucks.
Wow, I don't know why I said that.
2/17/2007 c1 113Travis C. Eckert
Wow, if you do that I am almost certain she won't come back. Be open to her coming back. Good poem though.
113Travis C. EckertWow, if you do that I am almost certain she won't come back. Be open to her coming back. Good poem though.