for Imperfections5/25/2008 c8 Hannah
UPDATE! hahas.
Dudette, the hols are here so you've got no more excuses. XD
Hmm, while having the story being told from both perspectives is great, it's rather draggy if you repeat a scene. So rather, you could have one scene told from Jack's perspective, then the next Drew can narrate. Readers don't exactly want to re-read the scene if it's the same thing but rather have the story flow.
So there. I reviewed. lol
UPDATE! hahas.
Dudette, the hols are here so you've got no more excuses. XD
Hmm, while having the story being told from both perspectives is great, it's rather draggy if you repeat a scene. So rather, you could have one scene told from Jack's perspective, then the next Drew can narrate. Readers don't exactly want to re-read the scene if it's the same thing but rather have the story flow.
So there. I reviewed. lol
5/11/2008 c8 annabelle
HAHA i lazy to sign in, sorry.
CAN YOU STOP IT WITH CLIFFHANGERS. GOSH. WHAT'S WITH THE PREMONITIONS AND SECRECY OF HIS DARNED ILLNESS ARGH RJIEWOJFODSAKLDJA
okay anyway this chapter was nicer than the last xD but drew thinks too much like a girl.
"Was she jealous at last? Was she was she was she?"
hoho. update soon thankyou.
HAHA i lazy to sign in, sorry.
CAN YOU STOP IT WITH CLIFFHANGERS. GOSH. WHAT'S WITH THE PREMONITIONS AND SECRECY OF HIS DARNED ILLNESS ARGH RJIEWOJFODSAKLDJA
okay anyway this chapter was nicer than the last xD but drew thinks too much like a girl.
"Was she jealous at last? Was she was she was she?"
hoho. update soon thankyou.
5/9/2008 c1 Hannah
hey =D
I like the story. Hahas, update soon, so I won't be kept guessing! What happened to Drew? =/ Don't let it be anything BAD. I'd be heartbroken. Wish I had a best friend like him, hahas.
hey =D
I like the story. Hahas, update soon, so I won't be kept guessing! What happened to Drew? =/ Don't let it be anything BAD. I'd be heartbroken. Wish I had a best friend like him, hahas.
4/7/2008 c8 
2codeblue92
hellohello(:
yay I like this chapter. :D
oh btw it says it was updated on the 7th April ;) not 8th. you could ammend that if you want. HAHA.(:
hmm maybe you could write longer chapters to spice up stuff :D
and nope, I don't see any errors here! :D
2codeblue92hellohello(:
yay I like this chapter. :D
oh btw it says it was updated on the 7th April ;) not 8th. you could ammend that if you want. HAHA.(:
hmm maybe you could write longer chapters to spice up stuff :D
and nope, I don't see any errors here! :D
4/3/2008 c7 cel1927
YOU OBVIOUSLY ADORE CLIFFHANGERS xD
(and why didnt you tell me that you updated! *crestfallen*)
HAHA. eh hurry update luh! what happened to drew! and HAHA you know, they look/sound/act more like a couple than best friends!
(was that intentional? xD)
YOU OBVIOUSLY ADORE CLIFFHANGERS xD
(and why didnt you tell me that you updated! *crestfallen*)
HAHA. eh hurry update luh! what happened to drew! and HAHA you know, they look/sound/act more like a couple than best friends!
(was that intentional? xD)
3/21/2008 c7 Parker
WTH, this is not helping at all, wth happened to Drew!
WTH, this is not helping at all, wth happened to Drew!
3/14/2008 c1 Parker
HELLO! I'm here! Anyway, do continue. What happened to Drew? D: I like Drew wth. Why wasn't I born with a best guy friend too, not fair. And this caused me to miss out on Mugging Session for Biology, feel guilty. Kinda lazy to read the other story, though. Heh.
HELLO! I'm here! Anyway, do continue. What happened to Drew? D: I like Drew wth. Why wasn't I born with a best guy friend too, not fair. And this caused me to miss out on Mugging Session for Biology, feel guilty. Kinda lazy to read the other story, though. Heh.
3/10/2008 c6 codeblue92
LOL. 57min rule? interesting.:D ohman what happened to Drew? :/ eh this chapter's rather short
I spotted a few mistakes though.. but not anything too drastic don't worry (:
okay, reviewed!(: anyways, update soon!:D
LOL. 57min rule? interesting.:D ohman what happened to Drew? :/ eh this chapter's rather short
I spotted a few mistakes though.. but not anything too drastic don't worry (:
okay, reviewed!(: anyways, update soon!:D
3/3/2008 c5 cel1927
EH UPDATE MANZXZ you know i actually like this fic more than your other one xD surprisingly since the "conflict" is already there.
EH UPDATE MANZXZ you know i actually like this fic more than your other one xD surprisingly since the "conflict" is already there.
11/28/2007 c5 jem
poor Drew D:
the two pov is quite good to explain a little here and there but it gets a little draggy sometimes! but it's nice to know how the two characters are feeling etc.
actually i think it's quite well written! :D
PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D
poor Drew D:
the two pov is quite good to explain a little here and there but it gets a little draggy sometimes! but it's nice to know how the two characters are feeling etc.
actually i think it's quite well written! :D
PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D
9/11/2007 c5 codeblue92
lol.. this is seriously cliche man :D haha.. but still, I like the plot (: I think you could try to like cut the povs.. it makes things more obvious and like.. stuff that the readers know and can deduce are written so it makes it kinda long-winded haha :] and maybe you could cut some description a bit in certain parts.. makes it more natural :D
lol.. this is seriously cliche man :D haha.. but still, I like the plot (: I think you could try to like cut the povs.. it makes things more obvious and like.. stuff that the readers know and can deduce are written so it makes it kinda long-winded haha :] and maybe you could cut some description a bit in certain parts.. makes it more natural :D
5/23/2007 c5 remae
new reader! I like your story so far, I just read all 5 chapters. What did the note say? I love Drew, I wish I had a best friend as cool as him! haha Update soon!
new reader! I like your story so far, I just read all 5 chapters. What did the note say? I love Drew, I wish I had a best friend as cool as him! haha Update soon!
3/16/2007 c4 Miss-Scissorhands
Thank you! I'd appreciate if you'd do that.
The chapter was pretty good. Update soon!
Thank you! I'd appreciate if you'd do that.
The chapter was pretty good. Update soon!