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5/27/2009 c2 10Badger In Disguise
that really stinks, it was a wonderful story. I just loved the whole concept, it made you realize the true brutality of the world and I am extrenely sad to see such a great story pulled away from where other writers can read it and enjoy the wonders of your writing

This is out of the blue, but...

Would you beta my new story Spilt Blood?
1/18/2009 c21 anon
I saw this ending comming. It makes me sad, but I respect you for it. :D
11/30/2008 c21 Badger In Disguise
A truly well-written peice. The cruel injustice of the world is never kind to those different. Some people dont care enough to consider how it might effect other for even a second before doing something as awful as killing another human being. This piece, i believe, shows the true world,not the world in which everything ends perfectly depicted in many other stories.

I honestly cannot give you any advice to make the story any better, it's already perfect as it is. Dont ever change it, no matter how many flames you get from jealous people.

Until Next Time
10/21/2007 c1 10MzKit10
Beautifully written and perfectly sad. Usually i'm against sad endings but this felt...right almost. very well written and Congratualtions on finishing it. Its wonderful

Kat.
9/14/2007 c10 13FM Radio
You have the women’s head spinning. You used the plural form of woman. It should be woman's.
9/1/2007 c21 20Twilight Starr
Sad ending.

I almost cried.

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c20 Twilight Starr
It is so sad!

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c19 Twilight Starr
Cute flashback.

The mom and the sister are very cruel people.

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c18 Twilight Starr
Uh-oh. She was caught.

At least she found a use to help people with her ability.

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c17 Twilight Starr
Wonderful chapter.

It's very sweet. :)

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c16 Twilight Starr
Another cute, lovely chapter.

I like the wedding scene.

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c15 Twilight Starr
Cute chapter.

It made me smile. :)

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c14 Twilight Starr
I like Vevina.

This chapter explains a lot.

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c13 Twilight Starr
Interesting chapter.

~Twilight Starr~
9/1/2007 c12 Twilight Starr
He really loves her. :)

~Twilight Starr~
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