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2/19/2007 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
While rather short, you managed to insert some personality and emotion into it. I like the topic and how you did it. It's an interesting comparison (perhaps a little used, like death and ashes), but it's still good. Nice job.
2/19/2007 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I have a friend that is sometimes like this... she keeps herself at a distance because she is afraid to get hurt. Well done.
2/19/2007 c1 16Silk Ribbon
i love the concept of ashes, but maybe you could've made your metaphors a bit more hidden? I understand this was probably written out of angst - one of those "spur of the moment" poems - and that's fantastic. otherwise, keep it up!

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