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11/19/2007 c1 33Opal Rose
Huh. This is interesting, and really good. As a writer, I like how you didn't mention anything but what was happening, making there be a sense of mystery. As a reader, the same thing makes me wonder what else in going on with them, but it makes you feel what the girl is feeling.

I know, I suck at reviews, so sorry. But, really, this is really good.

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