for Like Summer2/24/2008 c1 
22DeadlyPinkPuchu
so, Jasmine, my dear, I decided that I very much needed to catch up on your lovely fiction writings. Thus, here I am!
and really... lol!
I really like the ending. It's very deep, in a roundabout sort of way.
22DeadlyPinkPuchuso, Jasmine, my dear, I decided that I very much needed to catch up on your lovely fiction writings. Thus, here I am!
and really... lol!
I really like the ending. It's very deep, in a roundabout sort of way.
2/20/2007 c1 17Sobriquet Queen
Ha ha.
Is someone else out there as cynical as me?
I love it. Finally, somebody else who wonders what all these obsessive pre-pubescent girls are so interested in. So, as you can see, I pretty much love the idea.
But I also like the gradual change from complete infatuation ('cos that ain't love) to a sort of disappointment - I don't know, I think the ending's open to interpretation.
The season theme is a great idea - ties the whole thing together well.
The best thing about this story, second perhaps to the idea? The summary and introduction. Summary: short, sweet and got my attention more than well. The introduction: not quite so great, but you can't really go with something so short, can you?
17Sobriquet QueenHa ha.
Is someone else out there as cynical as me?
I love it. Finally, somebody else who wonders what all these obsessive pre-pubescent girls are so interested in. So, as you can see, I pretty much love the idea.
But I also like the gradual change from complete infatuation ('cos that ain't love) to a sort of disappointment - I don't know, I think the ending's open to interpretation.
The season theme is a great idea - ties the whole thing together well.
The best thing about this story, second perhaps to the idea? The summary and introduction. Summary: short, sweet and got my attention more than well. The introduction: not quite so great, but you can't really go with something so short, can you?
2/19/2007 c1 23writer4hire
"I’m trying to be deep and shit but I dunno if it’s really coming out right."
Best part, hands down.
Besides the fact that I could figure out if it was about Panic! At The Disco...the voice is awesome.
23writer4hire"I’m trying to be deep and shit but I dunno if it’s really coming out right."
Best part, hands down.
Besides the fact that I could figure out if it was about Panic! At The Disco...the voice is awesome.