6/15/2007 c1 31Leaving Here
ah. it makes me cry.
im in this place in my life.
this is great.
keep writing.
words are power,
liz
ah. it makes me cry.
im in this place in my life.
this is great.
keep writing.
words are power,
liz
5/15/2007 c1 Universal Empire
Hey, very nice poem! I loved the repetition of Keeper of the Light. As always, you writing is astounding! A real pleasure reading this piece.
Sadistikal
Hey, very nice poem! I loved the repetition of Keeper of the Light. As always, you writing is astounding! A real pleasure reading this piece.
Sadistikal
4/22/2007 c1 53perpetual Audio
lost amongst your way. i nice poem showing a message through interpretation.
very good my friend :)
lost amongst your way. i nice poem showing a message through interpretation.
very good my friend :)
3/20/2007 c1 82RootbeerFloat
hey its Amy! I liked this poem a lot. I dunno, I could definately relate, and I know i say that a lot, but I really could. I'm trying to take this one path but I dont have the patience and I dont know exactly how to get to it. lol so this is definately a good peice.
much love, Dustytiger
Amy
AKA
RootbeerFloat
hey its Amy! I liked this poem a lot. I dunno, I could definately relate, and I know i say that a lot, but I really could. I'm trying to take this one path but I dont have the patience and I dont know exactly how to get to it. lol so this is definately a good peice.
much love, Dustytiger
Amy
AKA
RootbeerFloat
2/24/2007 c1 82Honor Bound
hey there, been quite a while, no? nice piece here, liked the repetition in it, gives a real desperate or plaintive tone to the piece. good piece, ttyl
hey there, been quite a while, no? nice piece here, liked the repetition in it, gives a real desperate or plaintive tone to the piece. good piece, ttyl
2/20/2007 c1 86Cheesy Brussle Sprouts
Wow, I really liked this one. It's plaintive and hopeful at the same time. Very nicely done.
Kira
The Unsummary Queen is BACK!
Wow, I really liked this one. It's plaintive and hopeful at the same time. Very nicely done.
Kira
The Unsummary Queen is BACK!
2/20/2007 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I like the repitition of the phrase "keeper of the light". Very effective.
I like the repitition of the phrase "keeper of the light". Very effective.