for Daisy Chains8/27/2007 c1 
65KarlaMarie
I like it. It was odd in a interesting way that had me wanting to read it again and understand what i was seeing. I am not a big poem reader, Although as you know i write them, but this one has a simple yet`I dont know, I have forgotton the word i wanted to use...lol
sufice to say it interested me, and altough i found it odd you did not use more then two words a line, I found it very well wwrittin considering you did not use more then two words per line.
Well written story with such restrictions...
cheers
KarlaMarie
65KarlaMarieI like it. It was odd in a interesting way that had me wanting to read it again and understand what i was seeing. I am not a big poem reader, Although as you know i write them, but this one has a simple yet`I dont know, I have forgotton the word i wanted to use...lol
sufice to say it interested me, and altough i found it odd you did not use more then two words a line, I found it very well wwrittin considering you did not use more then two words per line.
Well written story with such restrictions...
cheers
KarlaMarie
2/23/2007 c1 eeeeeeeeeeerehtukuofj
This is good. Really strange, but good. It's short, but it works, and it has a clear rhythm. I enjoyed it.
Elearuthe
This is good. Really strange, but good. It's short, but it works, and it has a clear rhythm. I enjoyed it.
Elearuthe
2/23/2007 c1 14Confused Yellow Stallion
I really liked this poem, it was pretty. Good job! Thank you a lot for the review on my story! I *heart* you, even though I don't know you... Unless I do... O_o I don't think I know you though. So... Yeah...
Confused Yellow Stallion
14Confused Yellow StallionI really liked this poem, it was pretty. Good job! Thank you a lot for the review on my story! I *heart* you, even though I don't know you... Unless I do... O_o I don't think I know you though. So... Yeah...
Confused Yellow Stallion