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8/27/2007 c1 65KarlaMarie
I like it. It was odd in a interesting way that had me wanting to read it again and understand what i was seeing. I am not a big poem reader, Although as you know i write them, but this one has a simple yet`I dont know, I have forgotton the word i wanted to use...lol

sufice to say it interested me, and altough i found it odd you did not use more then two words a line, I found it very well wwrittin considering you did not use more then two words per line.

Well written story with such restrictions...

cheers

KarlaMarie
2/23/2007 c1 eeeeeeeeeeerehtukuofj
This is good. Really strange, but good. It's short, but it works, and it has a clear rhythm. I enjoyed it.

Elearuthe
2/23/2007 c1 14Confused Yellow Stallion
I really liked this poem, it was pretty. Good job! Thank you a lot for the review on my story! I *heart* you, even though I don't know you... Unless I do... O_o I don't think I know you though. So... Yeah...

Confused Yellow Stallion

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