for Heart Lust, Death Lust2/21/2007 c1 
80The Magician Joseph
so surreal, so strange. I like the crowded kind of 'stream of thought' format, it works so well for the poem (that is not sarcasm). Loved it.
Well smiles :)
later
80The Magician Josephso surreal, so strange. I like the crowded kind of 'stream of thought' format, it works so well for the poem (that is not sarcasm). Loved it.
Well smiles :)
later
2/20/2007 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has a marvelous depth of flow and progression. I like how the sound constantly enhances the movement through repetition and pacing. So many specific letter groupings add to the audibility. "G', and "L", I hear alot through this, making a resonating acoustical sound. It is an interesting theme-concept that runs through this as well. Kind of like overview emotion, as I read it, or more accurately distanced emotion. Well written. MD:77.
879Moondog DozierThis has a marvelous depth of flow and progression. I like how the sound constantly enhances the movement through repetition and pacing. So many specific letter groupings add to the audibility. "G', and "L", I hear alot through this, making a resonating acoustical sound. It is an interesting theme-concept that runs through this as well. Kind of like overview emotion, as I read it, or more accurately distanced emotion. Well written. MD:77.