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12/16/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Beautiful. The repeated imagery, and the epilogue of prose, is very powerful. I shall also have you know that I love "I think I’m just a blank sheet of blue sky waiting to be written

on with something more substantial than clouds."
2/21/2007 c1 10Sunbleached
that was so beautiful, and i think i am living in a fairy tale, a sad one.
2/21/2007 c1 10manasa-dong
Haha, just so everyone knows... it is a "death".

Leave the translation to your own tastes.

((and the road keeps getting shorter, and the sky that I follow just gets longer...))
2/21/2007 c1 36Monochrome Lovers
Unrequited-it sounds more like death than a breakup, maybe because of the lofty, celestial quality in the descriptions, and the timelessness it is trying to convey. Especially at the end.

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