for Island of the Lost5/28/2007 c2 With A Love To Read
Sounds like an intersting story. However the idea is a little played out, but once the story gets rolling i hope you change my mind about that.
Few gramatical errors and the word "I" used a little too much.
Sounds like an intersting story. However the idea is a little played out, but once the story gets rolling i hope you change my mind about that.
Few gramatical errors and the word "I" used a little too much.
3/7/2007 c2 
8somuchformyhappyending
lol...sand bunnies...hah...I'm never gonna get over that part...
bec
8somuchformyhappyendinglol...sand bunnies...hah...I'm never gonna get over that part...
bec
3/3/2007 c2 8Panic At The Stress Disorder
And where are these 'explicit sex sense?'
lol, really good so far, keep it up!
8Panic At The Stress DisorderAnd where are these 'explicit sex sense?'
lol, really good so far, keep it up!
2/26/2007 c1 8somuchformyhappyending
hey! I actually really like this plot idea so I definitely think you should continue! I hope you post another chapter soon!
bec
8somuchformyhappyendinghey! I actually really like this plot idea so I definitely think you should continue! I hope you post another chapter soon!
bec