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11/7/2017 c1 1Eryth
There is only one thing that truly bothers me about OSTSG and sequel. You have created a fictional land with fictional kingdoms and towns and such, yet you reference Greece in several ways from the Oracle to Helen of Troy to Sirens...and Greece is very much in our nonfictional reality. Perhaps I am just weird and the only one who would be bothered by nonfictional cultural, historical, and borderline geographical references in a completely fictional work, but perhaps not. Ultimately, though, this is your work for you to write however it pleases you.
8/11/2017 c22 Diving in
Didn't they alreasy had this discussion about the necklace?
10/21/2014 c37 1MileyRowling
Great work! I really loved the series and am just getting caught up on my reviewing!
8/10/2014 c31 8ite Chomp Glomp
Okay so I realize that you'll probably never acknowledge this review, but it hurts my meart to see the royal family in disarray. The family is divided, and I just hope my family will never account to that. And to top it all off, Francine is DEAD! It's just. This family hurts me. Not only that, but I believe that this family has many bad qualities except for Francine and Penelope because they are awesome characters. I also just FEEL for Peter. He has it rough, but then again he brought some of it onto himself...
8/19/2013 c12 2awaitingthedawn
Um...wow. They make such a big deal out of such small things. Helena should learn kung fu and beat the shit out of everyone.
1/31/2013 c8 geekman9097
if you is getting tired of writing author's notes, stop writing author's notes!
10/16/2012 c37 1BatDarling
Oh my goodness! This is just a crazy good story! And I thought that OSTSG was the best thing ever! Helena is such an awesome character, the way she just jumped on Aurora! I thought for sure that she was going to smack Cindy's hand away too! But she's so loving and compassionate as well, she's wonderful! I'm so glad that you didn't change Cindy, she's just the way I... love...hate... her... :D
Also, one of my favorite parts was where Vincent was talking about how Alex was just as bad as him! I honestly always thought that, but then everyone just calls him frivilous, and I was like... no. He totally can be cruel, I mean he made his own family believe he was dead, totally almost started a war, and left Peter all his problems because he had to get what he wanted. Though I still adore him, he's my second favorite character :)
Honestly, I never much liked Robert. From the first time we met him I was just... eh. I do like his character though, you wrote him wonderfully.
Have you ever played Final Fantasy VII? There's a guy named Vincent and his personality is somewhat similar to yours, with the moodiness thing. And he has slightly long dark hair. I always seem to picture him when Vin is being cruel, though I picture something more like your description when he's being kind or serious or anything not mean.
Enough rambling, I can't wait to continue reading!
9/10/2012 c1 Kill
very interesting
8/16/2012 c1 simpleshark98
awesome!
7/22/2012 c1 2Seranade
Wow! Love your writing style! And the idea is so cool! Can't wait to read more! Keep up the amazing job!
7/15/2012 c37 9Ms.Julia
Loved this one as well :) going to read the next book!
4/21/2012 c37 1Bookworm-At-Starbucks
First off, awesome series. I'm reading this at night and it is freaking the hell out of me. Ironically, I asked my sister whose name is CINDY if she is awake and the girl snored. All Cindys are evil but we love them anyway.

Love Helena, she is naive yet not stupid if you know what I mean. Some people make naive people stupid and dense. So, congrats on that.

Vinny is to DIE FOR! I want to dip him in chocolate and gobble him all up. Yum. If only teenage boys at the age of 15+ were like him. *Sigh*

Robert is an Ass. With a capital A!

Eve is a fairy godmother. Well, kinda.

Chris is so cute. I wish I had a brother like him and I love her father!

GO TROY!
11/25/2011 c1 Rosedreamer101
Oh poo. nvm. I'll read this when you finished book 2. I'd suicide if i have to go through the pain of waiting to see what happens. :)
10/22/2011 c3 Mercuric Ink
Hahaha! I‘m enjoying this story so far. Helena‘s brattiness is really something.

I would however like to point out that the correct terms are ‘scallywag‘ and ‘En guarde‘ and not “scalawag“ and “Unguard“. xD
6/21/2011 c37 2Arabella Knightfair
Woww I love your stories! I love how you write!

How do you plan a book? I mean there must be so many back stories for all of these characters! Do you plan every back story for every character? Do you plan the whole story before you start writing? How do you not get confused or forget if you don't write everyday?

I loved this and can't wait to read the next book!
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