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5/15/2007 c1 10DarkBlysse
"Oh hark, the cry of death lark"-I love this line and the one before it, though I really must say that it should be "Oh hark, the cry of THE death lark."

Also, I thought the last line was a little...weak, I guess. It just didn't mesh with the preceding line and made the ending les-than-perfect. But the rest of the poem is perfect!
2/25/2007 c1 163sharks don't sleep
What I got out of this was someone day dreaming while standing in the rain. I don't know if that's what it's supposed to be, but very good.


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