for Misty Memories8/7/2011 c4 Sir Cheshire Holmes
So... NO chance you are ever going to update this, right? Even if I tell you I really like and want to read it really badly, right? I'm so curious to what will happen next!
So... NO chance you are ever going to update this, right? Even if I tell you I really like and want to read it really badly, right? I'm so curious to what will happen next!
6/1/2008 c4 The Reader
A wonderful story so far. Good detail about this strange religion. Pixie seems just right, slightly sassy, but still careful not to say the wrong thing especially to her "father". I am intrigued so even though you haven't updated this for awhile, would you please try to? This is a great story and you left such a good cliffhanger, that I think that I will go insane trying to figure out what comes next if you don't update!
A wonderful story so far. Good detail about this strange religion. Pixie seems just right, slightly sassy, but still careful not to say the wrong thing especially to her "father". I am intrigued so even though you haven't updated this for awhile, would you please try to? This is a great story and you left such a good cliffhanger, that I think that I will go insane trying to figure out what comes next if you don't update!
5/13/2008 c4 Me
Oh, this is creepy. But I'm hooked! Please update soon!
Oh, this is creepy. But I'm hooked! Please update soon!
8/14/2007 c4 
7xoxstorii-gurrlxox
Oo.. heyy.. just leaves a cliffie... haha. Oh well.. these four chapters were good.. Hehe. Its original. Update soon
7xoxstorii-gurrlxoxOo.. heyy.. just leaves a cliffie... haha. Oh well.. these four chapters were good.. Hehe. Its original. Update soon
8/5/2007 c4 4benignbengal
I remember this story! O= Although it was cruel to update after this long, I'm no better about updating anything. o-o' Cliffhanger! No! n-n A few spelling mistakes but overall a nicely done chapter. I would write a more productive review but my brain's fried after traveling all day. Thank you for updating!
4benignbengalI remember this story! O= Although it was cruel to update after this long, I'm no better about updating anything. o-o' Cliffhanger! No! n-n A few spelling mistakes but overall a nicely done chapter. I would write a more productive review but my brain's fried after traveling all day. Thank you for updating!
3/3/2007 c2 58Inkspilled
Still following it! XD Ironic the type of people they choose to sacrifice. But it's nice, introducing their lifestyles. A little creepy knowing that they're so familiar with murder, like even a fifteen year old girl. I'd like to see how this ends up. :)There are a few mistakes though.
58InkspilledStill following it! XD Ironic the type of people they choose to sacrifice. But it's nice, introducing their lifestyles. A little creepy knowing that they're so familiar with murder, like even a fifteen year old girl. I'd like to see how this ends up. :)There are a few mistakes though.
3/3/2007 c2 3Robert Gutheim
I'm reserving full judgement until after I';ve had a chance to read more but it's interesting so far.
3Robert GutheimI'm reserving full judgement until after I';ve had a chance to read more but it's interesting so far.
3/1/2007 c2 3endo.schism
Can't wait to read more. =)
This family's a bit wierd, with all their sacraficing and abuse and stuff. =S
But very interesting.
Oh, you might wanna read through both chapter again, there's a few spelling mistakes. =/
But great story so far, very original concept. =)
3endo.schismCan't wait to read more. =)
This family's a bit wierd, with all their sacraficing and abuse and stuff. =S
But very interesting.
Oh, you might wanna read through both chapter again, there's a few spelling mistakes. =/
But great story so far, very original concept. =)
2/26/2007 c1 58Inkspilled
Interesting, but some parts seem a little confusing, like it could be explained a little more. I didn't get a little part of the "slapping lesson", just the shoulder part. The two names shouldn't both start with a 'd' though, it just makes it harder to remember who's who. It's not boring at all, and is an interesting stoyline, so I can't wait for more. :)
58InkspilledInteresting, but some parts seem a little confusing, like it could be explained a little more. I didn't get a little part of the "slapping lesson", just the shoulder part. The two names shouldn't both start with a 'd' though, it just makes it harder to remember who's who. It's not boring at all, and is an interesting stoyline, so I can't wait for more. :)
2/26/2007 c1 6notallthosewhowander
Creepy. My mom's friend from Holland told me about this girl who got kidnapped years ago and when they finally found her she wanted to stay with the guy who'd taken her even though he'd kept her locked up and she didn't want to see her real family anymore. Kinda reminds me of this
6notallthosewhowanderCreepy. My mom's friend from Holland told me about this girl who got kidnapped years ago and when they finally found her she wanted to stay with the guy who'd taken her even though he'd kept her locked up and she didn't want to see her real family anymore. Kinda reminds me of this
2/25/2007 c1 17happysmiley474
all i can say is...
WOW.
i LOVE your writing style. it somehow fits very well with the context of this story.
please R&R my stories too, i'll appreciate that.
but really, great work!
17happysmiley474all i can say is...
WOW.
i LOVE your writing style. it somehow fits very well with the context of this story.
please R&R my stories too, i'll appreciate that.
but really, great work!