for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert12/22/2021 c22 doubleRsarra
Oh my gosh a rewrite! XD I also read this story when I was 16. I loved it so much I made a book form out of it and have had it saved in my google drive since 2008. I was scared it would be taken down for some reason. So excited 3
Oh my gosh a rewrite! XD I also read this story when I was 16. I loved it so much I made a book form out of it and have had it saved in my google drive since 2008. I was scared it would be taken down for some reason. So excited 3
7/10/2020 c1 Cecelia Fenkem
I haven't read this type of fiction in a long time. I really appreciate the writing so far.
You characterize everyone so well. You didn't hyper-focus on their physical features, like so many other authors do. You showed the characters, not described them.
Thank you.
I haven't read this type of fiction in a long time. I really appreciate the writing so far.
You characterize everyone so well. You didn't hyper-focus on their physical features, like so many other authors do. You showed the characters, not described them.
Thank you.
4/4/2020 c22 Faerille
Hey! I'm super excited to read your updated version of this story on Wattpad, but for some reason I cannot find it? Is it public?
Hey! I'm super excited to read your updated version of this story on Wattpad, but for some reason I cannot find it? Is it public?
2/16/2020 c22 Angelina
OH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS STORY. Thank you so much for your hard work towards your writing, it had grammatical errors..but you already know that haha. I think you are one of my favorite FictionPress writers. I am planning on reading the updated version on WattPad, cannot wait. Keep up the good work. Xoxo
OH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS STORY. Thank you so much for your hard work towards your writing, it had grammatical errors..but you already know that haha. I think you are one of my favorite FictionPress writers. I am planning on reading the updated version on WattPad, cannot wait. Keep up the good work. Xoxo
12/13/2019 c22 Em
So excited about this - I remember reading this story at one point when I was younger and I just found it again now because of this 2019 update - I binged the whole story in a few hours and am absolutely still going to read the rewrite !
So excited about this - I remember reading this story at one point when I was younger and I just found it again now because of this 2019 update - I binged the whole story in a few hours and am absolutely still going to read the rewrite !
11/17/2019 c8 heal me forever
I thought Ezra was with Gills and not with Jackson when you first introduced Seb’s friends in previous chapters?
I thought Ezra was with Gills and not with Jackson when you first introduced Seb’s friends in previous chapters?
9/30/2019 c22 Bookworm6789
Will you marry me? This was AMAZING! I LOVED IT IOVE SEBASTIAN AND MADSY AND EZRA AND DAVID MICHAEL AND LUCIUS AND AAAAAAHHHHH MY GOD THIS WHOLE THING WAS JUST AMAZING HOLY SHIT!
...Ahem, anyway...
This is by far the best romance I have read in years like, anywhere. Baby, you need to get this published because I'm telling you now, you will make a FORTUNE! I actually fucking cried when Madsy took Seb out for one last game, I'm not even exaggerating, and that bit where Nolan turns up and Seb tells him off? BRILLIANT! I thought Nolan would turn put to be a big bad but no, he's just a tool, lol. Hands down, my new favourite book, please write more and PLEASE BE MY LIFE PARTNER YOU BEAUTIFUL GENIUS! I CAN COOK!
Best love story ever, I cannot even begin to tell you how much it has touched my heart, and I know that its gonna stay there forever. Never stop writing, babe, your work is a GIFT! Xxx
Will you marry me? This was AMAZING! I LOVED IT IOVE SEBASTIAN AND MADSY AND EZRA AND DAVID MICHAEL AND LUCIUS AND AAAAAAHHHHH MY GOD THIS WHOLE THING WAS JUST AMAZING HOLY SHIT!
...Ahem, anyway...
This is by far the best romance I have read in years like, anywhere. Baby, you need to get this published because I'm telling you now, you will make a FORTUNE! I actually fucking cried when Madsy took Seb out for one last game, I'm not even exaggerating, and that bit where Nolan turns up and Seb tells him off? BRILLIANT! I thought Nolan would turn put to be a big bad but no, he's just a tool, lol. Hands down, my new favourite book, please write more and PLEASE BE MY LIFE PARTNER YOU BEAUTIFUL GENIUS! I CAN COOK!
Best love story ever, I cannot even begin to tell you how much it has touched my heart, and I know that its gonna stay there forever. Never stop writing, babe, your work is a GIFT! Xxx
9/30/2019 c13 Bookworm6789
Why does she keep saying no? Ffs girl, jump the sexy imaginary friend! I think I know what Nolan is now, and I wanna punch him in the penis. LOVING THIS!
Why does she keep saying no? Ffs girl, jump the sexy imaginary friend! I think I know what Nolan is now, and I wanna punch him in the penis. LOVING THIS!
9/27/2019 c22 Amelie
! I was just think about this story recently
! I was just think about this story recently
9/25/2019 c22 Tanii
I read Sebastian Bear so long ago... It's literally been years! I'm so excited to read the new version and to relive their story once again!
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I read Sebastian Bear so long ago... It's literally been years! I'm so excited to read the new version and to relive their story once again!
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9/24/2019 c6 Guest
Am reading it again for the fourth time. Totally awes
Am reading it again for the fourth time. Totally awes
6/29/2019 c21 Guest
OMG! This is definitely one of the most creative story I have ever read! I absolutely enjoyed it. You are definitely one amazing talented author! Definitely one of the best of the best stories here on Fictionpress! Thank you so much for sharing with us! I'm so going to miss Madsy, Seb, David, Ezra, Lucian and just about everything!
OMG! This is definitely one of the most creative story I have ever read! I absolutely enjoyed it. You are definitely one amazing talented author! Definitely one of the best of the best stories here on Fictionpress! Thank you so much for sharing with us! I'm so going to miss Madsy, Seb, David, Ezra, Lucian and just about everything!
6/12/2018 c21 blue macchiato
I loved loved loved this omg I finished this a couple years ago but I suddenly remembered this and came back and it was as good as I remembered... I think this is a fic I will never ever forget
I loved loved loved this omg I finished this a couple years ago but I suddenly remembered this and came back and it was as good as I remembered... I think this is a fic I will never ever forget