for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert4/25/2010 c21 
1The Sweetest Girl
Aw, perfect story, perfect ending, perfect! I heart you for writing and posting this in FP :)
Can't wait for the Lucian story! :D
1The Sweetest GirlAw, perfect story, perfect ending, perfect! I heart you for writing and posting this in FP :)
Can't wait for the Lucian story! :D
4/24/2010 c21 2asianinvasion0530
I LOVED this story! It was amazingly creative and I think it's wonderful what it says about imagination. And I loved Sebastian and his pervertedness - he was so funny and awesome! Anyways, this was a great pleasure to read. =]
2asianinvasion0530I LOVED this story! It was amazingly creative and I think it's wonderful what it says about imagination. And I loved Sebastian and his pervertedness - he was so funny and awesome! Anyways, this was a great pleasure to read. =]
4/24/2010 c19 1The Sweetest Girl
Auchii, now i'm crying.
I hope it's all going to end happy! They need their happy ending!
1The Sweetest GirlAuchii, now i'm crying.
I hope it's all going to end happy! They need their happy ending!
4/24/2010 c18 The Sweetest Girl
So far, this story is a bomb! Can't believe that I found it just now. Sebastian is a sweetie, no matter how perverted he was or is :D
Madeline is the perfect copy of the outsider girl, who makes up her friends, sadly, I never had imaginary friends.
So far, this story is a bomb! Can't believe that I found it just now. Sebastian is a sweetie, no matter how perverted he was or is :D
Madeline is the perfect copy of the outsider girl, who makes up her friends, sadly, I never had imaginary friends.
4/20/2010 c21 8castiel89
I must admit that I had seen the story on here before, but never got to reading it. Then, when I was looking for ones to read when I had no updates, I couldn't remember the frickin' title! Can you say FAIL?
Anyways, I came across it on A Drop of Romeo, and I about squeeled with delight that I found a link!
And seriously.. I L.O.V.E.D the story! I read this whenever I was able to - whether it was on my laptop or my phone - when I had free time from work and other personal committments.. And thanks to the addictiveness of the Sebastian (I so want my own invisible friend now), I ignored any update alerts I recieved while reading this. Now I must go catch up on those!
Amazing story! I damn near cried when Seb had to leave her. :)
8castiel89I must admit that I had seen the story on here before, but never got to reading it. Then, when I was looking for ones to read when I had no updates, I couldn't remember the frickin' title! Can you say FAIL?
Anyways, I came across it on A Drop of Romeo, and I about squeeled with delight that I found a link!
And seriously.. I L.O.V.E.D the story! I read this whenever I was able to - whether it was on my laptop or my phone - when I had free time from work and other personal committments.. And thanks to the addictiveness of the Sebastian (I so want my own invisible friend now), I ignored any update alerts I recieved while reading this. Now I must go catch up on those!
Amazing story! I damn near cried when Seb had to leave her. :)
4/4/2010 c3 NB-writer
Your story is so original, or at least I've never read a story about an imaginary friend. I see myself in your main character so much it's kind of scary. To bad I don't have an imaginary friend. Still nice writing and awesome plot.
Your story is so original, or at least I've never read a story about an imaginary friend. I see myself in your main character so much it's kind of scary. To bad I don't have an imaginary friend. Still nice writing and awesome plot.
4/4/2010 c1 Juliet
Helo, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo, and your story was nominated and inducted onto the site. Here's your raving review:
This fantasy story has its humor splashes-and is most certainly a unique storyline. It's highly reviewed and a SKoW winner. In the end, you'll be wanting an invisible friend, too.
XOXO,
Juliet
Helo, there. It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo, and your story was nominated and inducted onto the site. Here's your raving review:
This fantasy story has its humor splashes-and is most certainly a unique storyline. It's highly reviewed and a SKoW winner. In the end, you'll be wanting an invisible friend, too.
XOXO,
Juliet
4/3/2010 c21 2Cee.wat.i.live.for
Wow! I remember reading most of this story a long time ago, but i never finished it.. I don't know why though because it is amazing! Im so glad I came across this again and finished it because it was so good- and Im so excited to read the sequal now -I love Lucian Boom!;)- This was a great story plot and very well written. I can't wait to read more of your works
2Cee.wat.i.live.forWow! I remember reading most of this story a long time ago, but i never finished it.. I don't know why though because it is amazing! Im so glad I came across this again and finished it because it was so good- and Im so excited to read the sequal now -I love Lucian Boom!;)- This was a great story plot and very well written. I can't wait to read more of your works
3/12/2010 c21 pbgurl
I'm so unbelievably happy I read this. One of the most KICK A** stories I have ever read. It had me crying, laughing, angry, happy.
This really had one of the best and most unique plots of any story I read. I'm gonna go read the sequel and your other stories. ^_^
-Liz :D
I'm so unbelievably happy I read this. One of the most KICK A** stories I have ever read. It had me crying, laughing, angry, happy.
This really had one of the best and most unique plots of any story I read. I'm gonna go read the sequel and your other stories. ^_^
-Liz :D
3/8/2010 c21 2Gracie Girlie
Hi!
To begin I was unsure about this story. Clearly those doubts vanished because here I am at the end! Very original and I enjoyed it a lot :)
Gracie
2Gracie GirlieHi!
To begin I was unsure about this story. Clearly those doubts vanished because here I am at the end! Very original and I enjoyed it a lot :)
Gracie
2/27/2010 c21 fallingtonowhere
I absolutely LOVED this story. there wasn't a thing that was wrong with it :) it was unique and very well written. i could practically see dreamland in my head, and it made me want my own invisible friend to take me there :D and i am completely in love with Sebastian Bear. he was so devoted to madsy, and they were so cute and sweet together, and... omygosh i just loved them ^_^ AND they got to be together in the end *sigh*
even the bad parts were good (and not bad like poorly written or anything, bad like bad for her). like when she was stuck in the lowlands :o and she almost got killed *gasp* but then lucian saved her, and then seb came to rescue her! AHH! seriously, i could gush about how amazing the story was, but i'd probably just end up repeating myself a bunch of times and sound like an idiot :P so i'll end with this: dreamland was portrayed wonderfully, all the supporting characters were amazing, i am in love with the sweet/sexiness that is sebatian bear, i think you are a wonderful author who has amazing characters (i just finished Skinny dipping with grove murray, and that was amazing as well), and i can't wait to read all your other stories :)
I absolutely LOVED this story. there wasn't a thing that was wrong with it :) it was unique and very well written. i could practically see dreamland in my head, and it made me want my own invisible friend to take me there :D and i am completely in love with Sebastian Bear. he was so devoted to madsy, and they were so cute and sweet together, and... omygosh i just loved them ^_^ AND they got to be together in the end *sigh*
even the bad parts were good (and not bad like poorly written or anything, bad like bad for her). like when she was stuck in the lowlands :o and she almost got killed *gasp* but then lucian saved her, and then seb came to rescue her! AHH! seriously, i could gush about how amazing the story was, but i'd probably just end up repeating myself a bunch of times and sound like an idiot :P so i'll end with this: dreamland was portrayed wonderfully, all the supporting characters were amazing, i am in love with the sweet/sexiness that is sebatian bear, i think you are a wonderful author who has amazing characters (i just finished Skinny dipping with grove murray, and that was amazing as well), and i can't wait to read all your other stories :)