for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert9/13/2009 c4 I died. Good bye
So far Sebastion reminds me of how i pictured Edward cullen being in his spare time when i read twilight . . . .
They're both pervs
I love your story so far!
So far Sebastion reminds me of how i pictured Edward cullen being in his spare time when i read twilight . . . .
They're both pervs
I love your story so far!
9/8/2009 c1 
1Narnar001
great story really really nice .
i liked how the charecters gradually become more sentemental .
good luck
1Narnar001great story really really nice .
i liked how the charecters gradually become more sentemental .
good luck
9/5/2009 c3 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
ahahahahaha i am officially hooked
i love it
its so funy
great job
ahahahahaha i am officially hooked
i love it
its so funy
great job
9/2/2009 c20 Fangbanger
Woowoo! That was an amazingly awesome love story! You, my dear, are definitely a talent to watch, and I sincerely hope you consider trying to get this published professionally because I don't think I've ever read a more fantastically funny and touching tale than this.
Much love,
Fang
Woowoo! That was an amazingly awesome love story! You, my dear, are definitely a talent to watch, and I sincerely hope you consider trying to get this published professionally because I don't think I've ever read a more fantastically funny and touching tale than this.
Much love,
Fang
8/31/2009 c21 ImaginarySuperstar
I found this story through SKOW and I'm so glad I decided to read it... I've gotta say, what attracted me to this story was the title... very amusing, haha.
Anyway, I loved the story and couldn't stop reading it until I realized it was 4am and there was no way I could finish reading the rest of the story without feeling like a zombie the next day. But yes, it was THAT hard to stop.
It's got quite a creative plot and therefore very refreshing. :D (Makes me almost wish I had an imaginary friend growing up, haha.)
Well, keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stuff soon. And congratulations on winning a SKOW award - you deserve it! :)
I found this story through SKOW and I'm so glad I decided to read it... I've gotta say, what attracted me to this story was the title... very amusing, haha.
Anyway, I loved the story and couldn't stop reading it until I realized it was 4am and there was no way I could finish reading the rest of the story without feeling like a zombie the next day. But yes, it was THAT hard to stop.
It's got quite a creative plot and therefore very refreshing. :D (Makes me almost wish I had an imaginary friend growing up, haha.)
Well, keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to reading some of your other stuff soon. And congratulations on winning a SKOW award - you deserve it! :)
8/27/2009 c21 25Morine
I just read this story in two days. And let me just say, it was well worth the time. I found this story originally on the Skow awards. And I've been looking for a good story to read lately. So when I stumbled across this story, I was more than pleased.
The name of the story is already captivating in itself. It took me so long to start it because the first two chapters were a bit slow, but once Sebastian was introduced, I was more than pulled in to this story.
Although there were a few typos, your writing style is very easy to read and I enjoyed every second of it. If this were a published book, I would definitely pick it up in the store and buy it!
Congratulations on your Skow win and thank you for sharing this story with us!
- Morine
25MorineI just read this story in two days. And let me just say, it was well worth the time. I found this story originally on the Skow awards. And I've been looking for a good story to read lately. So when I stumbled across this story, I was more than pleased.
The name of the story is already captivating in itself. It took me so long to start it because the first two chapters were a bit slow, but once Sebastian was introduced, I was more than pulled in to this story.
Although there were a few typos, your writing style is very easy to read and I enjoyed every second of it. If this were a published book, I would definitely pick it up in the store and buy it!
Congratulations on your Skow win and thank you for sharing this story with us!
- Morine
8/25/2009 c5 Anamtear
I really love your story so far, it's just totatly, omg, peanut-butter-and-chocolate-oreos good.
but the thing that really got me to write a review(cuz I don't do nice things like this often) was when I went to the chapter scroll bar to see how many chapters were in this and I saw at the bottom "EPILOGUE CONTAINS SEX SCENE"... I almost died laughing. I love the truth. I love it more when it's full out blunt like that.
You're really pretty kind of amazing... well, your stories are. And I hold the firm belief that thine who can writeith a good story...ith, totatly rocksith.
...say 'ith' at the end of stuff just makes its sound cooler.
I really love your story so far, it's just totatly, omg, peanut-butter-and-chocolate-oreos good.
but the thing that really got me to write a review(cuz I don't do nice things like this often) was when I went to the chapter scroll bar to see how many chapters were in this and I saw at the bottom "EPILOGUE CONTAINS SEX SCENE"... I almost died laughing. I love the truth. I love it more when it's full out blunt like that.
You're really pretty kind of amazing... well, your stories are. And I hold the firm belief that thine who can writeith a good story...ith, totatly rocksith.
...say 'ith' at the end of stuff just makes its sound cooler.
8/23/2009 c21 hydrocancellation
Love this story and it's going to my Favourites. If I have the time, I'll reread and hopefully give you a chapter to chapter review. ;)
Love this story and it's going to my Favourites. If I have the time, I'll reread and hopefully give you a chapter to chapter review. ;)
8/21/2009 c21 2akaCHEEKS
aaww! this was one of the cutest story i've ever read on fictionpress! i can't believe i've been putting it off for the past year! oh man! i remember reading the first few chapters a while back and thinking to myself, wow these are some long chapters and just giving up! thank god i finally just went ahead and read it! it sort of reminds me of sundays at tiffany's by james patterson, but no worries! your version is so much more adorable than his!
2akaCHEEKSaaww! this was one of the cutest story i've ever read on fictionpress! i can't believe i've been putting it off for the past year! oh man! i remember reading the first few chapters a while back and thinking to myself, wow these are some long chapters and just giving up! thank god i finally just went ahead and read it! it sort of reminds me of sundays at tiffany's by james patterson, but no worries! your version is so much more adorable than his!
8/21/2009 c20 akaCHEEKS
i'll read these last two tomorrow. its really good but i am so freaking sleepy man
i'll read these last two tomorrow. its really good but i am so freaking sleepy man
8/19/2009 c13 akaCHEEKS
alright i am so sleepy i am literally falling asleep in front of my laptop. read the rest tomorrow.
alright i am so sleepy i am literally falling asleep in front of my laptop. read the rest tomorrow.