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1/28/2018 c21 11Ravide
This story is nothing short of amazing, it truly is one of the best works I've read. There are a billion things that I love about SBIP but what really stands out are the characters. I've never seen such unique personality traits in other stories and it really makes me wonder how you came up with them.(Tell me plz especially with Madsy) An yways love ya and hope to continue seeing you write more fantastic stories. (on a side note here's the first review in 2018)
11/16/2017 c18 FurtiveLabyrinthine
Chapter Eighteen

Nows really not the time for a heart to heart with an old flame, Seb. Your girl is literally about to be physically and mentally ruined... and you're chatting.
At least he's pretty.
11/15/2017 c2 FurtiveLabyrinthine
Chapter Two

Ah, finally. The imaginary friend makes his appearance. The first chapter was kind of slow, so it's nice that more significant things happened in this chapter. Things have kicked off nicely.
1/8/2017 c1 Marvi
Please don't ever take this story story or the second one with Ezra down. I get really weird cravings every couple of years to read them. And each time I'm afriad you'll have removed them.
4/7/2016 c21 mgaa
best thing I had in a really long time...thank you sooo much...I truly enjoyed it... 'c,'
11/13/2015 c21 geeyeahyeah
I can't put into words how amazing of a storyline that was! Sebastian is THE dream guy, for real. I am so glad you love happy endings because it made the story so great at the end. The typos I noticed were overlooked by the need to keep reading on. And I had to self regulate with this story, I needed to put it down to finish school work. That was quite difficult to do! This story really keep me wanting to keep reading. Madelines character development was steady, gradual, and not too rushed. The way you wrote her story made me feel her happiness, sadness, and even a bit of excitement for Seb. Overall, I am glad I came across your story and I cannot wait to read the sequal. Awesome job!
5/18/2015 c2 MudbloodPride
Hello :)
Okay, tbh, I'm mainly a fanfic reader (on you can find me under this name) and I don't usually venture into the realm of original fics. But I have to say, I AM INTRIGUED.
I love your writing style, and Maddy calls out to to me on a personal level - I can be a bit of an introvert and a people hater sometimes.
I'm loving the story and I can't wait to see where it goes!
4/2/2015 c21 LetMeWonder
I adored this story. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this!
3/13/2015 c1 Damnjpg
The way you said "platonic sort of love" like twice, made me think of "no homo" hehehe
12/8/2014 c6 Miss Brittany
11/12/2014 c21 9JoleneMarselis
I loved every second of this story, it's the ultimate fantasy,your imaginary friend coming to life and you have written down such a strong and believable storyline that I couldn't stop reading (thanks for keeping me up till 2 am,lol) You have an incredible talent, and you should think about publishing this story for real.
9/27/2014 c21 ajashire1
I loved this it was so sweet and ended in the most beautiful way.

Thanks for the read.
8/18/2014 c21 2Chiisutofupuru
You are amazing. I'm not sure how this scene could have gone any better, though I'm pretty terrible at these myself so my opinion doesn't really matter I don't think.

Thank you very much for writing this awesome story. I enjoyed it :)

8/18/2014 c20 Chiisutofupuru
Well, if you 'almost' teared up I'm in the same position. I was so expecting to break out into tears myself and would have LOVED to but became disappointed at the anti-climatic(well, to a point-) scene that unfolded when Seb came back.

Left me a bit disappointed :(

Besides that, it was a great story! And now I don't have to follow it no more :P
(As much as reading about Lucian might be interesting I don't think I can without Madsy around).

8/12/2014 c20 2Xena Fox
I have to say, I hardly ever review but for this beautiful treasure I just had to. This story is the best I have ever read on fictionpress and it just may be my favourite of all time. I sincierly thank you for positing this and wish you the very best :)
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