
2/10/2009 c12
1S.L. Gunn
i meant to tell you this earlier, but i love that you have Madeline actually wearing makeup!
so many stupid stories play the "natural beauty, no zits, perfect skin" card and it's irritating to me.
also, i love Ezra!
and Sebastian (duh)
and purple!
SLGunn

i meant to tell you this earlier, but i love that you have Madeline actually wearing makeup!
so many stupid stories play the "natural beauty, no zits, perfect skin" card and it's irritating to me.
also, i love Ezra!
and Sebastian (duh)
and purple!
SLGunn
2/9/2009 c7 S.L. Gunn
and now twilight IS a movie!
...a fantastic one, might i add. although entirely too short.
anyway, to your story.
i burst into a fit of giggles when Sebastian takes her to the dreamworld and their in the dark beforehand, searching and Maddeline goes "what was that?"
..."i was stretching"
ahahaha, that was great!
and now twilight IS a movie!
...a fantastic one, might i add. although entirely too short.
anyway, to your story.
i burst into a fit of giggles when Sebastian takes her to the dreamworld and their in the dark beforehand, searching and Maddeline goes "what was that?"
..."i was stretching"
ahahaha, that was great!
2/9/2009 c4 S.L. Gunn
not that you need the reviews..
(THOUSANDS? are you kidding me?)
but you deserve them so much!
this chapter, and this story are "like wham and boom!"
:) ...i love Davie!
(and Sebastian, of course)
i want purple eyes!
SLGunn
not that you need the reviews..
(THOUSANDS? are you kidding me?)
but you deserve them so much!
this chapter, and this story are "like wham and boom!"
:) ...i love Davie!
(and Sebastian, of course)
i want purple eyes!
SLGunn
2/8/2009 c21
29fictionalxbliss
How was this hard for you? It was so...perfect. :D
It took my breath away. I want my own Sebastian...hehehe.

How was this hard for you? It was so...perfect. :D
It took my breath away. I want my own Sebastian...hehehe.
2/8/2009 c15 fictionalxbliss
Oh my god. you are so evil. Bit in a good way!
Oh my goodness, I'm crying! UGH! I really, really, really hate Dylan right now. UGH!
Oh my god. you are so evil. Bit in a good way!
Oh my goodness, I'm crying! UGH! I really, really, really hate Dylan right now. UGH!
2/4/2009 c6
1Harlee Rae
AWESOME! WRITE MORE OR I WILL DIE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! (The cpitilaization is on purpose.)

AWESOME! WRITE MORE OR I WILL DIE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! (The cpitilaization is on purpose.)
1/25/2009 c17
2Shelbaybayz
this is probably my second time reading this story, but I just realized you change Madeline's middle name like 4 times in this story, its hilarious.

this is probably my second time reading this story, but I just realized you change Madeline's middle name like 4 times in this story, its hilarious.