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1/19/2009 c17 11MorbidAngelXxX
Hello, I love your story. It keeps me at the edge of my seat and is very creative. I was wondering if you'd ever seen the movie "The 10th Kingdom," because the Kershanks remind me of a part in that movie and it made me laugh a lot. Anyway, keep up the good writing, it's amazing.
1/19/2009 c21 1AlphaBeatKayGee
i absolutely adored your story so much! it was so different...so not cliche like all of the other stories. I loved the topic and how it wasn't random romance,girl nerd meets jock love, or incest of some sort [ nothing against those..there's just too many =) ] Yes..back to your story : it was soo intriguing i couldn't stop reading for more than 5 minutes at a time...almost dropped my phone in the water while reading too =S...I love the way it was written,all of the characters, everything about it and I'm def. gonna check out some of your other stories =D. Anyhoo i don't want my review to sound like everyone elses but considering you have about 54343032 of them i might have failed! Just know you're story is one of my many favorites =D

-kay gee
1/18/2009 c21 3CreativeChick233
i absoloutely loved this storyy(:
1/12/2009 c21 3RayaSlayer
haha...it was very sexual...

Haha, i'm so glad things turned out the way they did.

I was dying in agony along with her when they were apart.

They are just so perfect for each other!

Your plot is very interesting. I love how you made the imaginary people real and you never know, they actually might be. It was very entertaining and really really really creative.

Thank you so much for such a fantastic, fabulous, excellent...the list goes on, story :)
1/10/2009 c21 8Niccy
Hey there

I just wanted to say thanks for sharing this story. I definitely enjoyed reading it and loved the dream world that you created.

The grammar was distracting at times, but overall it has to be one of my favourites. :)

Niccy
1/7/2009 c21 5eternallily
This story was amazing! I loved reading it, it really connected with people I think. You made the characters all seem real and you made a whole entire world with your words and that's quite an accomplishment. It's hard to create a new world because you always have to create some boundary lines. But you made it so that even though there were different worlds that the invisibles came from, you created some rules to go along with them. I'm not sure if that all made sense, but school just started and my brain's fried at the moment.
1/4/2009 c21 1BurningSensations
I loved the whole story though the epilouge was sort of but not really dissapointing .

But you are an amazing author !

And this story is the best, I actully teared up in one of the chapters, so yeah I guess that's kind of pathetic but it shows how much a good author you are ;)
12/30/2008 c2 goldenticktocks
wow. this story looks like it's alot of fun to read. so i'm definitely going to continue reading this until the end.
12/29/2008 c1 Izabel
I absolutely love this story and with the mention of you eventually taking it down, I decided that I'm going to read it again while waiting for the next Lucian Boom chapter. The thought of it being gone is just...horrible.
12/28/2008 c21 7unfortunatesoul418
OMFG! i absolutly loved this story. it made me cry at certain parts. i want sebastian.

well this was one of the best stories i've ever read on this website. and im not lying at all. lying is for posers.

I loved it.

a sequel to this sounds pretty good about now.

Loved it,

Brenna
12/28/2008 c1 6McQuinn
This is riddled with a lot of mistakes. You should definitely edit!
12/27/2008 c1 2Rizzler
This is too good to be on this site. Seriously. I finished reading Twilight, and...YOU'RE STORY IS SO MUCH BETTER! Sorry if your a fan and I offend you, but that is my honest to god truth. Here's my advice to you amazing author: Get this published. Get rich. Have lots of Seb fan girls.
12/26/2008 c14 10Aurora Corona
OMG its like 12 am now and I'm up to this chapter and it's SO DARN GOOD!

I feel like crying, Fern obviously was the one to make the move, but then I get why Madsy didn't want to listen. If I were her, I'd be mad too. And I'd have my Sebastian Bear! GOSH I'm in love with him already :D

I feel so giddy now. Props to you and your amazing story!

Love,

curse the stars
12/25/2008 c1 Aurora Corona
Heyy.

I've always seen this story around fp and SkoW, but I couldn't really get into the first chapter every time I tried to read. But this time I finished the entire ch1, and I'm lovin' it! Like ALOT ALOT :D

Poor Maddie... Nolan's leavin. He sound's like he likes her. :)

Well.. On to the next chapter!

Love,

curse the stars
12/18/2008 c21 art monkey
I really loved this story. I like perverted things. :) So this story made my day.
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