for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert8/7/2014 c17 Chiisutofupuru
The brat Dylan did not say Seb's name I don't think... did he? I just thought he said 'it is you' or something vague.
Which Mr. Bear went running? There were two in that scene but I'm leaning towards it was father that went running... well, I guess I may find out in the next chapter.
Chiisu
The brat Dylan did not say Seb's name I don't think... did he? I just thought he said 'it is you' or something vague.
Which Mr. Bear went running? There were two in that scene but I'm leaning towards it was father that went running... well, I guess I may find out in the next chapter.
Chiisu
8/7/2014 c16 Chiisutofupuru
On to chapter seventeen! Getting more and more exited! Learning new things about another world :P
On to chapter seventeen! Getting more and more exited! Learning new things about another world :P
8/5/2014 c14 Chiisutofupuru
I'm prolly going to break into tears by the end of this story. I just know it! I almost always do, and you are a good writer so I prolly will. It'll happen for sure.
Chiisu
I'm prolly going to break into tears by the end of this story. I just know it! I almost always do, and you are a good writer so I prolly will. It'll happen for sure.
Chiisu
8/2/2014 c6 
2LaMB-COW
Okay, so I've read most of this story before, but I (sadly) didn't finish it. Its been a couple months and I decided to find out how the rest of Madsy and Seb's story goes (and then read the sequel :3). Okay, but with the socks at the end and with Seb saying "you're back" I didn't think anything of it before... But now? Im betting she imagined the socks- that they weren't really there. And Seb knew/realized that. Cool! Thats pretty awesome! (I love the concept of this story :D)
DFTBA
-Lamb
2LaMB-COWOkay, so I've read most of this story before, but I (sadly) didn't finish it. Its been a couple months and I decided to find out how the rest of Madsy and Seb's story goes (and then read the sequel :3). Okay, but with the socks at the end and with Seb saying "you're back" I didn't think anything of it before... But now? Im betting she imagined the socks- that they weren't really there. And Seb knew/realized that. Cool! Thats pretty awesome! (I love the concept of this story :D)
DFTBA
-Lamb
8/1/2014 c13 2Chiisutofupuru
I kinda figured that was the case. He can't do nothing without her...
She heard a bell? Not a ring? I don't really get that part. Explanation in another chapter perhaps?
Bout time I comment on your character.
I love how you've managed to keep her attitude the way it is for so many chapters. No one changes in a day or two. I'm getting exited for how this is going to end, both for... well, what I've mentioned in a previous review AND just to know the ending!
Chiisu
2ChiisutofupuruI kinda figured that was the case. He can't do nothing without her...
She heard a bell? Not a ring? I don't really get that part. Explanation in another chapter perhaps?
Bout time I comment on your character.
I love how you've managed to keep her attitude the way it is for so many chapters. No one changes in a day or two. I'm getting exited for how this is going to end, both for... well, what I've mentioned in a previous review AND just to know the ending!
Chiisu
7/31/2014 c11 kamill
Mad's whining has surpassed annoying. Everything is so overly dramatic with this girl. And she's completely unfocused, listless, just drifting through life it seems. I can't bring myself to be upset with Nolan, bcs at least he is doing something with his life. Let's not forget her harsh judgement of everything and everyone. Nothing is worth her time it seems, and everyone except her imaginary friend nation is some sort or arch villain. Ugh I really hope there's a life lesson in store for this girl at some point in this story.
Mad's whining has surpassed annoying. Everything is so overly dramatic with this girl. And she's completely unfocused, listless, just drifting through life it seems. I can't bring myself to be upset with Nolan, bcs at least he is doing something with his life. Let's not forget her harsh judgement of everything and everyone. Nothing is worth her time it seems, and everyone except her imaginary friend nation is some sort or arch villain. Ugh I really hope there's a life lesson in store for this girl at some point in this story.
7/31/2014 c12 Chiisutofupuru
Awe, no Gretal. Still want to meet her :P
Almost can't wait to get to the last chapter, those kind of scenes are HOT. You are good at writing them.
Chiisu
Awe, no Gretal. Still want to meet her :P
Almost can't wait to get to the last chapter, those kind of scenes are HOT. You are good at writing them.
Chiisu
7/30/2014 c10 kamill
I'm kind of sick of Madeline friend zoning everyone. No wonder she's so lonely.
I would have liked to see character pics because I'm still unclear on how Madeline looks.
I kind of feel bad for Gray. He was kind of pouring his heart out to Madeline about Fern and she called him a baby for it. Smh
I'm kind of sick of Madeline friend zoning everyone. No wonder she's so lonely.
I would have liked to see character pics because I'm still unclear on how Madeline looks.
I kind of feel bad for Gray. He was kind of pouring his heart out to Madeline about Fern and she called him a baby for it. Smh
7/30/2014 c9 kamill
I'm so ready to find out how Nolan managed to get Seb sent away.
I'm so ready to find out how Nolan managed to get Seb sent away.
7/30/2014 c6 Kamill
I find myself wishing that Madeline would just give in to Sebastian already.
I find myself wishing that Madeline would just give in to Sebastian already.
7/29/2014 c4 kamill
Great story so far. I'm thinking Sebastian is coaxing her to say things out loud for a very specific reason.
Great story so far. I'm thinking Sebastian is coaxing her to say things out loud for a very specific reason.
7/22/2014 c11 Chiisutofupuru
I really liked the end of this chapter with Gretal. I kinda want to meet her, lol.
I really liked the end of this chapter with Gretal. I kinda want to meet her, lol.
7/21/2014 c10 Chiisutofupuru
Couldn't finish over the weekend but this is pretty much where I got to. Don't even know if you look at your FP account anymore but whatever.
Was that drink something of her creation too? I loved the whole creation/imagination creation scenes and what they did. Hoping there is much more of THAT and a little less of this dream world. Besides meeting Seb's parents and friends will it become a huge part in this story? If not we only really needed to see it once, I think.
Chiisu
Couldn't finish over the weekend but this is pretty much where I got to. Don't even know if you look at your FP account anymore but whatever.
Was that drink something of her creation too? I loved the whole creation/imagination creation scenes and what they did. Hoping there is much more of THAT and a little less of this dream world. Besides meeting Seb's parents and friends will it become a huge part in this story? If not we only really needed to see it once, I think.
Chiisu