for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert5/15/2008 c21 Miss Retro
I think you did the "scene" very well-it wasn't sleazy or stupid, but it was tasteful.
Omg, it's over! I'm so sad! :[
Amazing. Amazing. Amazing.
I think you did the "scene" very well-it wasn't sleazy or stupid, but it was tasteful.
Omg, it's over! I'm so sad! :[
Amazing. Amazing. Amazing.
5/15/2008 c21 
9emilybh
I like this story- I think you did well, with the sex scene.
It was a teensy bit goofy- when she asked What are you doing and he replied You. But theres nothing wrong with that I dont think.
:D
9emilybhI like this story- I think you did well, with the sex scene.
It was a teensy bit goofy- when she asked What are you doing and he replied You. But theres nothing wrong with that I dont think.
:D
5/15/2008 c21 m
Don't put yourself down for that at all, it was amazing.
Don't put yourself down for that at all, it was amazing.
5/15/2008 c21 volleychick89
Aw, that was so sweet, hot, and humorous. You did a great job keeping them in character even as you wrote something that made you feel awkward. Another excellent story finished and I will def be checking out Lucian's!
Aw, that was so sweet, hot, and humorous. You did a great job keeping them in character even as you wrote something that made you feel awkward. Another excellent story finished and I will def be checking out Lucian's!
5/15/2008 c21 2Mehuh
I think it was great. It lets us use our imaginations! XD Good job, or so I thought. *smiles*
2MehuhI think it was great. It lets us use our imaginations! XD Good job, or so I thought. *smiles*
5/15/2008 c21 6givelifeyurall
you are a great writer, they aer seriousely the most adorable couple( and hottest) i've seen...i couldn't stop saying aw...aw.
6givelifeyurallyou are a great writer, they aer seriousely the most adorable couple( and hottest) i've seen...i couldn't stop saying aw...aw.
5/15/2008 c21 1eliza-smiles
...amazing... i wish my wedding could be as breathtaking as the one seb and madsy had in the faeforest... wow... i love this story and it will be interesting to see what lucian bloom's story is... awesome work...
1eliza-smiles...amazing... i wish my wedding could be as breathtaking as the one seb and madsy had in the faeforest... wow... i love this story and it will be interesting to see what lucian bloom's story is... awesome work...
5/15/2008 c21 DOLCEVITA
Well, it's about damn time they release all that sexual frustration! Haha. That was a cute wedding though, I can't wait to see what Lucians' story will be like!
Well, it's about damn time they release all that sexual frustration! Haha. That was a cute wedding though, I can't wait to see what Lucians' story will be like!
5/15/2008 c21 OoohLookACat
ahh but for a "first-timer" (sexy writer - LOL too easy to make jokes)
you were very good =]
i LOVE seb and madsy!
it's added to my favourites
and if it were a book
i would buy it =]
i feel like hugging the computer because they're finally together forever
but...that might look a little weird haha
can't believe its over
but i loved every second
izzie
ahh but for a "first-timer" (sexy writer - LOL too easy to make jokes)
you were very good =]
i LOVE seb and madsy!
it's added to my favourites
and if it were a book
i would buy it =]
i feel like hugging the computer because they're finally together forever
but...that might look a little weird haha
can't believe its over
but i loved every second
izzie
5/15/2008 c21 REEN
I never thought this would ever come out! BUT IT FINALLY HAS! SO AMAZING! Those vows were adorable. I love their wedding. The sex scene was amazing. I knwo you feel awkward writing them but i loved it. soo cute. I remember writing my first smutting sceen i was actually laughing the entire time. yes i'm weird like that. AND I LOVE SEB! I would love to be married to anyone remotely similar to him. Looking forward to Lucian's story!
I never thought this would ever come out! BUT IT FINALLY HAS! SO AMAZING! Those vows were adorable. I love their wedding. The sex scene was amazing. I knwo you feel awkward writing them but i loved it. soo cute. I remember writing my first smutting sceen i was actually laughing the entire time. yes i'm weird like that. AND I LOVE SEB! I would love to be married to anyone remotely similar to him. Looking forward to Lucian's story!
5/15/2008 c21 pete's sake delete the account
This was goofy and adorable and just perfect. You may have had difficulty writing it, but I'm glad you stuck with it. Well done, and congrats on finishing!
This was goofy and adorable and just perfect. You may have had difficulty writing it, but I'm glad you stuck with it. Well done, and congrats on finishing!
5/11/2008 c5 BluePillow
I get all jumpy of this story, Love it by the way. And Seb! I mean, GOD! That is wicked!
I get all jumpy of this story, Love it by the way. And Seb! I mean, GOD! That is wicked!