for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert4/7/2008 c20 
7MuseofMagic
I was blown away by that story. I don't know how else to say it. I was absolutely amazed. I loved it! Seb was great. Madsy annoyed me a bit at times, but hey, who can blame her when she's dealing with an insufferable invisible boy? XP
So you said something about a story dealing with Lucian? I am highly intrigued and hope you do do something there. I'm a sucker for bad boys *sighs*
7MuseofMagicI was blown away by that story. I don't know how else to say it. I was absolutely amazed. I loved it! Seb was great. Madsy annoyed me a bit at times, but hey, who can blame her when she's dealing with an insufferable invisible boy? XP
So you said something about a story dealing with Lucian? I am highly intrigued and hope you do do something there. I'm a sucker for bad boys *sighs*
3/30/2008 c20 gonnabefamous
Usually I'm all for sex but in this case I'm going to have to say No Sebxy...lol. There was closure in this chapter and I think the sex scene would kind of ruin that closure. Anyway loved the story, glad you stuck with it!
Aziza
Usually I'm all for sex but in this case I'm going to have to say No Sebxy...lol. There was closure in this chapter and I think the sex scene would kind of ruin that closure. Anyway loved the story, glad you stuck with it!
Aziza
3/29/2008 c20 iwishillwilluponyou
aw such a cute ending :3 i'm gonna miss this story now that it's over...
aw such a cute ending :3 i'm gonna miss this story now that it's over...
3/29/2008 c20 cerulean sea
Oh my god. I loved this story. It was one of the best fiction stories I had ever read in my life. IT'S SO CUTE. It even made me cry. Thank you.
Really. Thank you for writing a brilliant story. :D
Oh my god. I loved this story. It was one of the best fiction stories I had ever read in my life. IT'S SO CUTE. It even made me cry. Thank you.
Really. Thank you for writing a brilliant story. :D
3/27/2008 c20 7dj-baker
that was some awsome story woman!
love your imagination!
hope you got another story like this in store! cant wait for the epilogue please put it up soon!
~i was born brilliant but education ruined me ;p ~
7dj-bakerthat was some awsome story woman!
love your imagination!
hope you got another story like this in store! cant wait for the epilogue please put it up soon!
~i was born brilliant but education ruined me ;p ~
3/26/2008 c20 3OhSweetheart
Yay it was an aewsome ride, just read it all day, I can't wait for the epilogue
3OhSweetheartYay it was an aewsome ride, just read it all day, I can't wait for the epilogue
3/25/2008 c18 3Bravado Pirate
Yay! Chapter 20 was amazing and made me feel warm and fuzzy inside. A few punctuation errors, but who cares? It was so good. Cannot wait for Epilogue and Lucian's story!
3Bravado PirateYay! Chapter 20 was amazing and made me feel warm and fuzzy inside. A few punctuation errors, but who cares? It was so good. Cannot wait for Epilogue and Lucian's story!
3/25/2008 c20 1Color The Sky
Um, your pretty much my hero.
This story is firetrucking amazing.
I can't wait for the sequel! xD
1Color The SkyUm, your pretty much my hero.
This story is firetrucking amazing.
I can't wait for the sequel! xD
3/23/2008 c20 invisiblelover
yes sebxy
yes sebxy
3/23/2008 c20 d0rkifi3d
ahh I don't really care about the sex scene much if you added it I'm sure I would enjoy it :D
haha But yea this was a really nice story =D AWESOME story
I would really like to hear about how Lucian is doing though in the epilogue
ahh I don't really care about the sex scene much if you added it I'm sure I would enjoy it :D
haha But yea this was a really nice story =D AWESOME story
I would really like to hear about how Lucian is doing though in the epilogue
3/22/2008 c20 kalee
OMG! ive been following ur story forever and i love it!
YES SEBXY!
lol
keep up the writing!
cant wait for the sequel!
OMG! ive been following ur story forever and i love it!
YES SEBXY!
lol
keep up the writing!
cant wait for the sequel!
3/22/2008 c20 julizzle
Let me first tell you that this was such a wonderful, amazing, stupendous (and more ego-boosting words) story I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
It could do without the no-no-cha-cha, but I like Sebastian (without clothing on), so DO IT!
YES SEBXY. :)
Let me first tell you that this was such a wonderful, amazing, stupendous (and more ego-boosting words) story I have ever had the pleasure of reading.
It could do without the no-no-cha-cha, but I like Sebastian (without clothing on), so DO IT!
YES SEBXY. :)
3/21/2008 c20 3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
AH! NO! its not here! i cant read anything in this chapter! no fair!
3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATEAH! NO! its not here! i cant read anything in this chapter! no fair!