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3/17/2008 c20 2codyismypup
Yes Sebxy! Loved it!
3/17/2008 c20 Miss-Simmone01
I vote YES SEBXY lol. I agree it seems wrong not to after all the build up. and YAY for a sequel! loved this chapter! and that's my 2 cents
3/17/2008 c20 Emo-Shadow-14
3/17/2008 c20 1DuchessYappingDog
Yes Sebxy! Lawl. It just seems wrong that you've been building up to it... and it never happens. Also, I wanted to see Lucian again. Maybe some Ezra and Lucian? Eh eh? xD I also wanted to see... I dunno, Maddy and Seb in college and her friends' reaction to him. :D
3/17/2008 c20 Al
This was a FANTASTIC chapter! For months now this fic has been by FAR my favourite. Maybe i wasn't so happy with it lately because of the lowlands and possible doom, but w-o-w.


You are so talented! PLEASE don't stop writing.

and about the author note? either way sounds fine. What i'm dying to read about is Seb meeting Madsy's college friends. :)
3/17/2008 c20 Leila
I laughed, I cried, I fell in love (with Seb of course). ::Sighs:: It was truly a magical story. Thank you so much for writing it! Now take the next step and publish it! ;)

Cannot wait for the sequel. My guess is he'll end up with Ezra. ;) Hope I'm right.

And YES SEBXY! All that sexual tension has to lead somewhere!
3/17/2008 c20 Secret Heart01
"no problem with his conscious" - it should be "conscience"

also at some point you wrote "you're anger" .. it should be "your" ...

nice end. nothing else necessary :)
3/17/2008 c20 Pop the Bubble
well i spose its gotta be a



i don't think its a huge deal whether it happens or not,

but this is definetely one of my favourite favourite FAVOURITE stories of all time that i've read here :)

i love happy endings with a passion!

can't wait for the epilogue. or the sequel. or everything.


3/17/2008 c20 Zealot4life
lol. 'Life is a bitch cuz if it was a slut, it would be easy.' But i love the ending very, very much! Thank you for finishing it...plus adding an epilogue AND a sequel with the hot guy from down under(not Australia) ...what a deal! TY TY TY! To end it...

3/17/2008 c20 1Bellaria
loved it! can't wait for the epilogue and sequel! this rocked so much :D:D:D:D:D!
3/17/2008 c20 autumnsprite
Yes sebxy! lol, oh this chapter had me tearing up and then glowing with joy, the way you finnished the chapter was so superb! i love happy endings!
3/16/2008 c20 2darkangel402



That was an awesome story! OMG, I can't believe it's over! :(

It was really good and I love the way that you ended it! So cute!

And about the epilogue...NO SEBSKY...

Not a big fan of sex scenes... .

Anywho, I really loved it!

And congrats on winning! I'm really happy for you..you deserved it!

I think you should try and get this published! I would so buy it if it was a book!

It'g got everything a book needs: awesome plot, awesome characters, awesome imagination, awesome author!

Lol...but in all seriousness, you should try... *nodnod*

I mean, unless you don't want to...heh...

I love this story!

Can't wait to read more from you! ^-^
3/16/2008 c20 3ReadWriteLive
I think the ending is perfect the way it is...no epilogue necessary.

good story...fix it up a little (Grammatically and stuff) and it'll be great.

good luck with future projects
3/16/2008 c20 ILuvG33ks
Ahh! i loved it! yay! fabulously written and great imagination!
3/16/2008 c20 9Stahlut
oh I loved that. it couldnt of been an even better ending. It mad eme cry and laugh all in one, I absolutley love dit to little pieces. And I am happy wither way, with what you put in the epilogue.
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