for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert3/9/2008 c19 
13MayaD
ok so my guy friend (the poor soul) made a bad decision and called me right after I read this chapter. I was pretty much on the verge of tears and the sweet heart asks me what's wrong. So here I go on this big long rant where after every sentence I say, "IT IS HISTORICALLY INCORRECT, LOVE PULLS THROUGH LOVE MAKES YOU DO THE IMPOSSIBLE!" He simply agreed, knowing better than to say anything. One of my points was that even if Mr Sebastian over hear was eaten by a dragon and had disintegrated in his stomach, he would suddenly reveal that he had the power of molecular reconstructure, and the power to blow things up with a THOUGHT... so yes, even if he was eaten by a dragon, it'd be FINE...
but NO... there are these PEOPLE with their AUTHORITY and RULES and and and and and and and and and... no it's HISTORICALLY INCORRECT!
so in the end he said his mom was calling him and he ran away :D.
In any case, I'm in awe of your creativity and pure amazingness and wow you are just too cool.
13MayaDok so my guy friend (the poor soul) made a bad decision and called me right after I read this chapter. I was pretty much on the verge of tears and the sweet heart asks me what's wrong. So here I go on this big long rant where after every sentence I say, "IT IS HISTORICALLY INCORRECT, LOVE PULLS THROUGH LOVE MAKES YOU DO THE IMPOSSIBLE!" He simply agreed, knowing better than to say anything. One of my points was that even if Mr Sebastian over hear was eaten by a dragon and had disintegrated in his stomach, he would suddenly reveal that he had the power of molecular reconstructure, and the power to blow things up with a THOUGHT... so yes, even if he was eaten by a dragon, it'd be FINE...
but NO... there are these PEOPLE with their AUTHORITY and RULES and and and and and and and and and... no it's HISTORICALLY INCORRECT!
so in the end he said his mom was calling him and he ran away :D.
In any case, I'm in awe of your creativity and pure amazingness and wow you are just too cool.
3/9/2008 c19 MireMoor
AW still a great chapter but no! =( I cant wait to see what happens!*is hoping it'll be a good outcome*
AW still a great chapter but no! =( I cant wait to see what happens!*is hoping it'll be a good outcome*
3/8/2008 c19 starsfinallyxplode
Wow. Terrific chapter. All the wild adventure and heart-stopping romance...I'll be sad to see this story end.
All I can say is that there had better be some loophole so Seb and Madsy can be together in the end. (Oh, and so Lucian can be free, despite his fatalistic attitude.)
Wow. Terrific chapter. All the wild adventure and heart-stopping romance...I'll be sad to see this story end.
All I can say is that there had better be some loophole so Seb and Madsy can be together in the end. (Oh, and so Lucian can be free, despite his fatalistic attitude.)
3/8/2008 c19 bam
there's no words to describe how good this story is.
there's no words to describe how good this story is.
3/8/2008 c19 40Moosher
I dont remember if ive reviewed your things or not, because i haven't been on Fictionpress for a while now with how hectic university n everything is. But i had to now because i needed to tell you, like the many other reviewers, that this story is one of the most exciting beautiful stories Ive read in a long time. Your writing style is simply fantastic.. you bring so much life into all of your characters, and you somehow made me completely emotionally involved and captivated(i was seriously tearing up and then grinning at multiple points. Your characters are phenomenal and ur plot line is just crazy..its just amazing. Youve seriously got major talent and i would LOVE it if you'd post the last chapter soon.. You'd pretty much make my week.
I love David Michael, and Seb and Madsy, and Gray and Ezra and Lucian.. and aw heck.. i loved them all. Awsome writing, keep it up :)
you're going on my favorite everythings
Have a great day!
40MoosherI dont remember if ive reviewed your things or not, because i haven't been on Fictionpress for a while now with how hectic university n everything is. But i had to now because i needed to tell you, like the many other reviewers, that this story is one of the most exciting beautiful stories Ive read in a long time. Your writing style is simply fantastic.. you bring so much life into all of your characters, and you somehow made me completely emotionally involved and captivated(i was seriously tearing up and then grinning at multiple points. Your characters are phenomenal and ur plot line is just crazy..its just amazing. Youve seriously got major talent and i would LOVE it if you'd post the last chapter soon.. You'd pretty much make my week.
I love David Michael, and Seb and Madsy, and Gray and Ezra and Lucian.. and aw heck.. i loved them all. Awsome writing, keep it up :)
you're going on my favorite everythings
Have a great day!
3/8/2008 c19 1chocoholics anonymous
What! only one chapter left? NO!
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fine. Please let there be some way for the two to be together though. I've already cried enough in this story... in my mind, I'm turning the full force of my puppy dog eyes on you.
1chocoholics anonymousWhat! only one chapter left? NO!
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fine. Please let there be some way for the two to be together though. I've already cried enough in this story... in my mind, I'm turning the full force of my puppy dog eyes on you.
3/8/2008 c19 Always Lost In A Book
=[ only one more chapter? aww. well all i have to say is this is the most original idea i've read on this site. this story is well written and hilarious and i cant get enough of it! im so excited for the next chapter! 19 was great even though it made me cry but i knew it was coming lol. you've done a wonderful job so far!
Jess
=[ only one more chapter? aww. well all i have to say is this is the most original idea i've read on this site. this story is well written and hilarious and i cant get enough of it! im so excited for the next chapter! 19 was great even though it made me cry but i knew it was coming lol. you've done a wonderful job so far!
Jess
3/8/2008 c19 6A.K.A. Writer's Block
Oh my god.
I'm crying.
Again. And, again, I cannot say how amazing this is. I... well, if you ever get this-or anything else-published, I swear up and down and all over the place that I will buy a copy the day it comes out, and then another one the day it comes out in paperback, and I will quite literally force anyone who comes without 200 yards of me to do the same.
Much, much, much, MUCH love,
Isabel.
6A.K.A. Writer's BlockOh my god.
I'm crying.
Again. And, again, I cannot say how amazing this is. I... well, if you ever get this-or anything else-published, I swear up and down and all over the place that I will buy a copy the day it comes out, and then another one the day it comes out in paperback, and I will quite literally force anyone who comes without 200 yards of me to do the same.
Much, much, much, MUCH love,
Isabel.
3/8/2008 c19 ridiculouskopec
And...
you have reduced me to tears. Unbelievably so. My heart sincerely just broke. Incredibel details and emotional description...and i shall say again, i am crying.
whoah. intense emotional wave of...emotion... i might die between updates... ah i love it ! so muchh!
And...
you have reduced me to tears. Unbelievably so. My heart sincerely just broke. Incredibel details and emotional description...and i shall say again, i am crying.
whoah. intense emotional wave of...emotion... i might die between updates... ah i love it ! so muchh!
3/8/2008 c19 1Bellaria
nice i like it though it is really really sad... poor madsy, the darkness sounds gross to/ i like what you've done with it, very nice.
~Bellaria
1Bellarianice i like it though it is really really sad... poor madsy, the darkness sounds gross to/ i like what you've done with it, very nice.
~Bellaria
3/8/2008 c19 3Crazy Talk
I...I don't know what to tell you. There were plenty of mistakes. The its/it's confusion, for example. But...jesus...if you don't update REAL soon...I'm going to have to threaten you. With dead rats wrapped in razor wire fired at you at high velocities. There. Beat that one!
You are a phenomenal writer...really. I don't tell you near often enough.
3Crazy TalkI...I don't know what to tell you. There were plenty of mistakes. The its/it's confusion, for example. But...jesus...if you don't update REAL soon...I'm going to have to threaten you. With dead rats wrapped in razor wire fired at you at high velocities. There. Beat that one!
You are a phenomenal writer...really. I don't tell you near often enough.
3/8/2008 c19 pangur
hmm, this chapter seemed a bit patchy to me, almost slapped together at the last moment. not like your usual style or quality or whatever. i mean, it was very long, but it just seemed like there was alot crammed in. especially the first scene, with the vampire and the light balls etc etc, i don't know, it was just very rushed and had alot of missing details, the whole chapter did. yeah, it just didn't seem like it was quite up to par with your normal quality. i almost got the impression that it was just a rushed out, slam-bam-thank-you-maam type of thing, like you were just feeling this 'good riddance' with the chapter and wanted it over with. anyway, good luck with the ending, though.
hmm, this chapter seemed a bit patchy to me, almost slapped together at the last moment. not like your usual style or quality or whatever. i mean, it was very long, but it just seemed like there was alot crammed in. especially the first scene, with the vampire and the light balls etc etc, i don't know, it was just very rushed and had alot of missing details, the whole chapter did. yeah, it just didn't seem like it was quite up to par with your normal quality. i almost got the impression that it was just a rushed out, slam-bam-thank-you-maam type of thing, like you were just feeling this 'good riddance' with the chapter and wanted it over with. anyway, good luck with the ending, though.
3/8/2008 c19 hairy-mushroom-nose
YAY, I was so excited I stayed up late just to read this update. LOVE the story line. I've cried so many times during this story. Even now I've let some tears escape. :'(
Poor Seb. And Madsy I guess... Lucian and Crake are my fav characters... and is Nolan going to make another reappearance? Surely Madsy can send messages to Seb through Gretal if the worst comes to the worst... Or maybe Seb is becoming mortal so they can't pull him back. That would be cool. :D
Well I hope you're feeling good and update soon! You lazy person you, heehee. Don't worries about it.
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YAY, I was so excited I stayed up late just to read this update. LOVE the story line. I've cried so many times during this story. Even now I've let some tears escape. :'(
Poor Seb. And Madsy I guess... Lucian and Crake are my fav characters... and is Nolan going to make another reappearance? Surely Madsy can send messages to Seb through Gretal if the worst comes to the worst... Or maybe Seb is becoming mortal so they can't pull him back. That would be cool. :D
Well I hope you're feeling good and update soon! You lazy person you, heehee. Don't worries about it.
x