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7/29/2013 c15 2Cornerstone
I was so hoping that Madsy would be able to look past her own ego and listen to Seb when he told her not to go with Dillion. I think that probably the thing that bothers me about Madsy. I mean, I like your story and I can see where you were trying to make her seem like a rebel. This chapter really did a good job of showing her softer side though, which I liked.
7/16/2013 c21 William Kayspear
Omg best sex scene ever! Well it isn't the best but I will surely remember it!
7/15/2013 c21 1ParanormalLove
I just found your story on YahooAnswers on my incredibly boring night before a crazy busy day and I'd like to sincerely thank you for keeping me up all night with Sebastian and Madeline's antics. This it truly one of the best I've read in a very long time. I haven't had such a whirlwind of emotions or felt so involved with a story's characters and might I say, it's been too long.
This is positively the most incredible story I've read and not just because Seb's purple eyes, the worlds they traveled to, and the people they encountered reminded me of "The Fallen Star" series. This is going to sound weird, but even though this is fiction, I kind of believe in magic again. I remember the imagination I had as a kid and this story just takes all the innocence of a child, broadening the horizon for what it could be should said innocence live on.

Truly marvelous. You deserve a motherfucking award for this story or a movie or something. I pray to all that is holy that you will become a published author because the world has never seemed duller with such art not being publicized and raved about everywhere.
I'm recommending this story to everyone I know and seriously, bro.

6/20/2013 c21 augmentedDREAMS
Adorable! :3
I don't have words to describe how incredible this story was! xD
6/11/2013 c21 Secerts
OMG I loved ur story, there was one small mistake, though, what was it again? Wait I'll rememeber...ummm...oh yeah see Lucian called madsy madeline ANNE hunter whereas crake called her madeline ROSE hunter so just fix that small lil' thing, Kay? Bye!
5/26/2013 c21 koerle
Loved this story. It's so origional and your writing style just made it a pleasure to read. Thank you for this wonderful story!
4/8/2013 c21 2TotallyA
I have just finished reading this story for the third time. I don't know what it is but this is definetly one of my all time favorites on here. The characters are awesome. Madsy's such an introvert while Seb's a totally joker. The world you created is so epic. Its definetly one of the top worlds I wish were real and that I could experience, right up there with Harry Potter, Doctor Who and Star Wars. Then you've got the dynamics between the characters. Their love and hate relationship is so unique in the sense that it's almost just love love with sexual tension and banter. It's just so different and fun! I just love this story. So much. I also love Lucian Boom's but I need to reread that now... I hope you continue to write! I know it's been a while since you've posted anything... But know, if you ever do, I (and I'm sure tons of other people) will be so thrilled and excited about whatever you do.

4/2/2013 c1 7EmmySide
3/23/2013 c17 SundayMorning73
Ok. Lord how many middle names does this girl have? Her mom said Christine, lucian said Anne, crake said rose and I'm sure there's another. And is it lucian boom or black? Cause thats thrown in there too.
3/21/2013 c6 SundayMorning73
Aww I love Sebastian, I wish madsy would stop being such a prude Haha.
3/14/2013 c1 Wickedforlife
Oh my god poor is beautiful , a depicts the problems of a teenager in the modern world perfectly. When i found out he was going to europe , i want to listen to "Congradulations i hate you " on repeat like i do when im pissed or jealous or scared or mad at myself but mistly all of them at once. How do you do this? Seriously, from a fan, this is amazing. I cant beleive im talking to you right now. I wish i could write something that reaches people this deeply like you have instead of just reading this. I understand the character,because i hate people,everybody tells me im a douche because of it, and i wanna change but am often too afraid too. Like her i also feel lost all the time when it comes to who i am,what are my from a fellow lost girl, thank you so much. I am forever way i can see me in her has taught me so much.
2/28/2013 c20 Guest
Cute. Made my day.
1/27/2013 c20 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Awww! So freaking cute! This was an amazing idea and the plot was awesome! Sebastian and Madeline are so freaking cute! I love their nicknames! Love it!
1/24/2013 c20 4R. Ficst
Pretty cute and very original. I love the concept. Love the story. Great work!
1/17/2013 c21 1DeadlyKitten2021
I absolutely LOVE this story! Completely AMAZING
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