for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert1/21/2008 c18 g
I really don't like the deal the council made. madsy and Mr. Bear 4 ever!
I really don't like the deal the council made. madsy and Mr. Bear 4 ever!
1/20/2008 c17 
5vocecara
i'm sorry i didn't review earlier.
you're a pretty good author, your descriptions make me cringe. in a GOOD way. like when dylan tried to rape her, i was shivering. you're good at the nuances and stuff:)
I WANT MY OWN SEB. why doesn't my imagination give me an invisible Seb too):
update soon okay! please please. haha can't wait for the next chapter.
read Of Imbeciles and Brilliance when you're free okay? and review please:)
5vocecarai'm sorry i didn't review earlier.
you're a pretty good author, your descriptions make me cringe. in a GOOD way. like when dylan tried to rape her, i was shivering. you're good at the nuances and stuff:)
I WANT MY OWN SEB. why doesn't my imagination give me an invisible Seb too):
update soon okay! please please. haha can't wait for the next chapter.
read Of Imbeciles and Brilliance when you're free okay? and review please:)
1/18/2008 c17 hello543
wow i think you should publish a book for this or there should be a movie...i am truly amazed on how great this is! well i cant wait until the next chapter! update soon!
wow i think you should publish a book for this or there should be a movie...i am truly amazed on how great this is! well i cant wait until the next chapter! update soon!
1/18/2008 c17 ladydragon93
I love love love your story. I'm sorry about the writers block, but it happens to the best of us.
I do hope you'll finish it, and admire your persistance. You can do it.
Hope to read more soon.
I love love love your story. I'm sorry about the writers block, but it happens to the best of us.
I do hope you'll finish it, and admire your persistance. You can do it.
Hope to read more soon.
1/18/2008 c17 12Dezi E
Yello. x3
I like this story very much so far and I think Seb is an adorable character.
A humongous brat, but cute.
I usually don't leave reviews, but you said that you had writers' block and I know it's encouraging to the spirit whenever you receive good reviews.
You've left me hanging though on that last chap. Can't wait to see what happens in the next.
Keep up the good work. :]
12Dezi EYello. x3
I like this story very much so far and I think Seb is an adorable character.
A humongous brat, but cute.
I usually don't leave reviews, but you said that you had writers' block and I know it's encouraging to the spirit whenever you receive good reviews.
You've left me hanging though on that last chap. Can't wait to see what happens in the next.
Keep up the good work. :]
1/16/2008 c17 7Planeswalker
I am absolutely in love with this story! I can't wait for the next chapter :D It's super amazing XD
7PlaneswalkerI am absolutely in love with this story! I can't wait for the next chapter :D It's super amazing XD
1/16/2008 c17 3Bravado Pirate
NOO! Don't give up! I was so freakin' exicted to see the alert in my inbox. And, as usual, it was amazing and wonderful and wow.
3Bravado PirateNOO! Don't give up! I was so freakin' exicted to see the alert in my inbox. And, as usual, it was amazing and wonderful and wow.
1/15/2008 c17 1onlyuptosaveit
I really hope you update soon. I'm going crazy here, trying to figure out how he got that punch in. Not that it wasn't completely and totally called for, but still :] Keep up the great work!
J
1onlyuptosaveitI really hope you update soon. I'm going crazy here, trying to figure out how he got that punch in. Not that it wasn't completely and totally called for, but still :] Keep up the great work!
J
1/14/2008 c17 mixedjunke
Ahh! Pleasee no more writers' block. I love this story, I want a Seb. No more writers block!
Of course, no pressure...
Ahh! Pleasee no more writers' block. I love this story, I want a Seb. No more writers block!
Of course, no pressure...
1/14/2008 c17 2XxAmberRomancexX
Yay, a new chapter! Very good, although I wish Madsy would actually listen to the warnings people give her from time to time. I know that's her character, but sometimes it's just like "Come ON girl! Do you have a death wish?" Anyways. Poor poor Sebastian. :[ I wanna hug him.
2XxAmberRomancexXYay, a new chapter! Very good, although I wish Madsy would actually listen to the warnings people give her from time to time. I know that's her character, but sometimes it's just like "Come ON girl! Do you have a death wish?" Anyways. Poor poor Sebastian. :[ I wanna hug him.
1/14/2008 c17 fatso17
ach, cliffhanger! CLIFFHANGER! no... i noticed that there were a few scene changes. is it ok, if you .. umm.. i dunno.. insert a few hyphens or something to let a poor dumb reader like me know? and i'm liking (and hating) the evil foreshadowing/glimpse of the crazy darkness ahead that you wrote about.
ach, cliffhanger! CLIFFHANGER! no... i noticed that there were a few scene changes. is it ok, if you .. umm.. i dunno.. insert a few hyphens or something to let a poor dumb reader like me know? and i'm liking (and hating) the evil foreshadowing/glimpse of the crazy darkness ahead that you wrote about.
1/14/2008 c17 people.are.strange
So sad that she's in the lowlands, I hope she makes it there. And then the ending was a kinda twist-cliffy in a way. Like what was his dad running to..? And I was wondering why the dude was able to see Seb, kinda defeated the purpose of 'imaginary' friend. Hah. Glad there was an update, made me a little happier.
So sad that she's in the lowlands, I hope she makes it there. And then the ending was a kinda twist-cliffy in a way. Like what was his dad running to..? And I was wondering why the dude was able to see Seb, kinda defeated the purpose of 'imaginary' friend. Hah. Glad there was an update, made me a little happier.
1/14/2008 c17 4stephy151
Another stunning chapter!
I wonder what Seb's dad is gonna do!
Poor Lucian, I hope he gets out too!
Oh wouldnt that be wonderful! Both Maddy and Lucian get out of the lowlands, Seb and Maddie get married, Lucian finds himself a nice girl and marries her, both couples have kids and everyone lives happily ever after!
But I think you and I both know that happily ever after is hard to come by!
Can't wait until the next chapter!
-Stephanie
4stephy151Another stunning chapter!
I wonder what Seb's dad is gonna do!
Poor Lucian, I hope he gets out too!
Oh wouldnt that be wonderful! Both Maddy and Lucian get out of the lowlands, Seb and Maddie get married, Lucian finds himself a nice girl and marries her, both couples have kids and everyone lives happily ever after!
But I think you and I both know that happily ever after is hard to come by!
Can't wait until the next chapter!
-Stephanie