for Sebastian Bear Invisible Pervert3/1/2007 c2 
1trix-a-belle
Talk about a bad day!
Her friendship with Nolan is gone out the very top window of a skyscraper, poor Madeline.
At least someone has given her a hug!
Yes i do pity her but a bit less now she has a hug.
xNx
1trix-a-belleTalk about a bad day!
Her friendship with Nolan is gone out the very top window of a skyscraper, poor Madeline.
At least someone has given her a hug!
Yes i do pity her but a bit less now she has a hug.
xNx
3/1/2007 c1 7nyxrabea
hm...i think...it was amazing. no doubt about it. too many good things, i cannot recount them all.
7nyxrabeahm...i think...it was amazing. no doubt about it. too many good things, i cannot recount them all.
3/1/2007 c2 1soFresh'likepomegranate
hahaha a cliffie! I like when boys have husky voices, it sounds deliciously sexy. xD I feel bad that the two ended on a bad note, seeing how Nolan was leaving for Europe, but Sebastian is here! Does he have a lip ring? That'd be kinda ultra lovely and wonderful. hehe, I liked the list she had at the end, especially number 4. ah, another amazing chapter, next one will have Sebastian possibley? hurrah!
1soFresh'likepomegranatehahaha a cliffie! I like when boys have husky voices, it sounds deliciously sexy. xD I feel bad that the two ended on a bad note, seeing how Nolan was leaving for Europe, but Sebastian is here! Does he have a lip ring? That'd be kinda ultra lovely and wonderful. hehe, I liked the list she had at the end, especially number 4. ah, another amazing chapter, next one will have Sebastian possibley? hurrah!
3/1/2007 c2 super happy nuclear girl
Another bit! :D this is cool, two chapters in one night. Yey.
Anywayy. I feel sorry for both Nolan and Maddi. Because they're both very stuborn and, bless. And yeh, this is good. Someone said it reminded them of Drop Dead Fred, which is an amazing film :)
I really like how this is going. Imaginary friend story are so cool, but I don't think I've ever come across anything that great about them. Maybe Fight Club, but that was more... craziness. This is funny though. Those twin girls remind me of those in The Shining, only not covered in blood... Yeah...
Anyway this is so cool! keep going :)
Another bit! :D this is cool, two chapters in one night. Yey.
Anywayy. I feel sorry for both Nolan and Maddi. Because they're both very stuborn and, bless. And yeh, this is good. Someone said it reminded them of Drop Dead Fred, which is an amazing film :)
I really like how this is going. Imaginary friend story are so cool, but I don't think I've ever come across anything that great about them. Maybe Fight Club, but that was more... craziness. This is funny though. Those twin girls remind me of those in The Shining, only not covered in blood... Yeah...
Anyway this is so cool! keep going :)
3/1/2007 c1 super happy nuclear girl
Wow, this is pretty amazing so far. I really like Madeline, she's quirky and I think if she were real I would make her my friend (or not, seeing as she is socially retarded). I like Nolan too, his name is really cool. He reminds me a lot of my friend too. And little David is really cute :)
So, this is really good. I like the humour in it, its realistic and witty and I really like it. God, I wish I could give you a better review, but im shit at them, aparently.
But I love it! So im gonna add it to my favourites :) keep going, Id like to read more :)
Wow, this is pretty amazing so far. I really like Madeline, she's quirky and I think if she were real I would make her my friend (or not, seeing as she is socially retarded). I like Nolan too, his name is really cool. He reminds me a lot of my friend too. And little David is really cute :)
So, this is really good. I like the humour in it, its realistic and witty and I really like it. God, I wish I could give you a better review, but im shit at them, aparently.
But I love it! So im gonna add it to my favourites :) keep going, Id like to read more :)
2/28/2007 c1 6Ollie May
This (very very very vaguely) reminds me of that movie Drop Dead Fred. And I absolutely love Drop Dead Fred. Ergo, I friggin love this story! I like Maddie, she's quirky. She's not a stereotype in any way even though she is antisocial. She's...human. Very nice.
There were a couple grammatical errors in this chapter (plain instead of plane, letters missing in a couple words) but nothing that detracted from the story. Brilliant job, m'dear, I hope you continue soon!
Ollie May
6Ollie MayThis (very very very vaguely) reminds me of that movie Drop Dead Fred. And I absolutely love Drop Dead Fred. Ergo, I friggin love this story! I like Maddie, she's quirky. She's not a stereotype in any way even though she is antisocial. She's...human. Very nice.
There were a couple grammatical errors in this chapter (plain instead of plane, letters missing in a couple words) but nothing that detracted from the story. Brilliant job, m'dear, I hope you continue soon!
Ollie May
2/27/2007 c1 15Exquisite Enigma
I like it, it's funny, witty, sarcastic, amusing, all the things that are good to read in a story!
15Exquisite EnigmaI like it, it's funny, witty, sarcastic, amusing, all the things that are good to read in a story!
2/27/2007 c1 11its raining purple elephants
This has to be one of the funniest stories I've read in a while. Its great, keept it up.
11its raining purple elephantsThis has to be one of the funniest stories I've read in a while. Its great, keept it up.
2/27/2007 c1 1soFresh'likepomegranate
wah. I like this so far. Is Mr. Poplar essential to the story? He sounds a little too knowledgeable to be just a teacher, maybe he's something else? or my imagination is just making this up and you had no intention of giving him another role? ahh, I'll stop now. heh. I like Nolan, he seems fun and pretty pretty cool. hahah I like Davie, he's cutee :D poor Madeline, her best friend is leaving for europe. I like her though, just very likable? heh, I dunno if that's a good way to describe her, but yeah, she's spiffy! I hope she meets an incredibly sexy guy during the break, maybe this imaginary boy that she forgets the name of? Hm. I bet he's sexy. hehe. lucky girl. goodness goodness, I really do like this so far, excited for more :D
1soFresh'likepomegranatewah. I like this so far. Is Mr. Poplar essential to the story? He sounds a little too knowledgeable to be just a teacher, maybe he's something else? or my imagination is just making this up and you had no intention of giving him another role? ahh, I'll stop now. heh. I like Nolan, he seems fun and pretty pretty cool. hahah I like Davie, he's cutee :D poor Madeline, her best friend is leaving for europe. I like her though, just very likable? heh, I dunno if that's a good way to describe her, but yeah, she's spiffy! I hope she meets an incredibly sexy guy during the break, maybe this imaginary boy that she forgets the name of? Hm. I bet he's sexy. hehe. lucky girl. goodness goodness, I really do like this so far, excited for more :D
2/27/2007 c1 volleychick89
well this looks interesting. i hope you continue it so I can get a better idea of what is going on. Well I mean I think I have it...lol, nvm. keep it up!
well this looks interesting. i hope you continue it so I can get a better idea of what is going on. Well I mean I think I have it...lol, nvm. keep it up!
2/27/2007 c1 Cherry Eyes
O. I love it. I have a feeling this is going to be a great story. can't wait to read more.
cheers
O. I love it. I have a feeling this is going to be a great story. can't wait to read more.
cheers
2/27/2007 c1 1trix-a-belle
It's gonna be a long night.
It seems that Madeline needs a hug, a very big one. I feel sorry for her, i'm sure the last day is meant to be filled with excitement, hopefulness and slight nervousness but she's depressed and lonely.
Great opening for a story, i'm waiting for next update :)
xNx
1trix-a-belleIt's gonna be a long night.
It seems that Madeline needs a hug, a very big one. I feel sorry for her, i'm sure the last day is meant to be filled with excitement, hopefulness and slight nervousness but she's depressed and lonely.
Great opening for a story, i'm waiting for next update :)
xNx