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4/25/2020 c1 Otakuami
I loved this! Both of them are artsy types, and both of them are outcasts in some way. Like how Graham can be mistaken as a gangster but isn't one at all and how Liam looks like a nerd but is actually a painter. I feel like this was giving a stereotypical character and then giving them careers which are different from what they actually are.
The concept of using 4 stories with different titles for both of them is definitely interesting. It showed us the progressing of their relationship, how they get to know each other and their interests regarding each other increase.
Usually many yaoi manga I have read only contain sex after introducing us to the characters.
Here it plays a little part and also kind of shows how it's their friendship that develops into something more.
8/4/2018 c1 19hazeleyes627
i liked the plot and the pace. that was really sweet. )
3/31/2018 c1 2SydneyCarton
Ok... well.. I can definitely say this is now one of my favorite stories on fictionpress... and if you knew how much I read on here, you would know how impressive that is. Seriously, this is great and sappy (in a good way) and played right to my feelings. You should really think about maybe publishing this as a short story or entering it in a contest.

Thanks and best of luck!
2/25/2017 c1 Guest
This is so sweet! True, it is a pointless tale of love, but who doesnt enjoy those, right?
2/24/2017 c1 2493BNMill
This was beyond cute. The awkwardness of the two of them, their building romance.

The bloody gift-belt! That was my favorite, I think.

Honestly, I have only good feelings about this story. I'll be reading it again, sometime soon. Of this, I have no doubt. As is, I'm getting ready to race off to work. Keep up the wonderful writing!
8/6/2016 c1 serwaverider
Cute and funny, great story. This would make an excellent script for stage or short film. Structurally sound with a lovely pace, I admit I would have liked to have seen Liam deal with Grahams mom at lunch or something. Well done. Thank you.
6/12/2016 c1 Guest
Please, please make a sequel. Heck, make a whole series. Seriously.
4/10/2016 c1 Guest
Do it. Just. Do it.
9/4/2014 c1 ougley
cute :)
7/25/2014 c1 3mily
3 3
Look
I'm a time Lord
(This story was awesome btw)
12/16/2013 c1 InsanityAndBeyond
Aww this was amazing!
I mean, I reallllly doubt you're still thinking of writing a sequel, but if you are, you definitely have interest!
11/28/2013 c1 You're Lovley
I died. Loooved it :-)
10/21/2013 c1 Greenpanda0u0
Wahhh! So freaking cutee!
9/3/2013 c1 1talia.mamane
Aw, I loved it!
I think you should know, I'm an artsy type AND a super-slightly-scary-obsessive punk rocker, (and combat boots? My favorite thing EVER) and I love seeing a couple portrayed as the two and trying to get into each other's worlds. I would love to see a sequel... It would be HILARIOUS if the Liam actually went to lunch with le extremely suspicious mom and her hot punk rocker son xD
8/16/2013 c1 4GrangerDanger333
Really cute XD I LOVE this! Thank you for writing! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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