
7/12/2012 c1 fadi25402702
That was marvelous.
Spectacular.
Heartwarming.
Simply beautiful.
I have to be honest, because in the beginning I was having doubts as to how this story was going to turn out. I thought the characters were too funky and unrealistic, I thought the whole story was going to be unsophisticated blabber, I thought the plot was going to be shallow and un-heartfelt.
I never was any wrong before in my life.
The people turned out to be more realistic and down-to-earth than many characters I have read before, the entire story had such a wonderful and endearing air around it, and the plot was gorgeously sculpted along those five rules and this made me so happy I can't even begin to tell you.
I personally love how Graham adored Liam from the beginning. I thought it was cute when his "face dropped" when he thought Sara was Liam's girlfriend. And I also love how he just barged into Liam's apartment and starting ravaging his mouth...that part was also amazing. hehe. XD
Gosh you have a skill with writing and you can be sure I am checking your profile for more stories after submitting this review.
Thank you SO much for writing this and I wonder truly how you can write anything better than this in a sequel (because in my opinion sequels should be better than the first) but I believe that you can do something amazing so I encourage you to write! Whatever it is, just write! :D
Thanks for writing this, truly. It made my night.
That was marvelous.
Spectacular.
Heartwarming.
Simply beautiful.
I have to be honest, because in the beginning I was having doubts as to how this story was going to turn out. I thought the characters were too funky and unrealistic, I thought the whole story was going to be unsophisticated blabber, I thought the plot was going to be shallow and un-heartfelt.
I never was any wrong before in my life.
The people turned out to be more realistic and down-to-earth than many characters I have read before, the entire story had such a wonderful and endearing air around it, and the plot was gorgeously sculpted along those five rules and this made me so happy I can't even begin to tell you.
I personally love how Graham adored Liam from the beginning. I thought it was cute when his "face dropped" when he thought Sara was Liam's girlfriend. And I also love how he just barged into Liam's apartment and starting ravaging his mouth...that part was also amazing. hehe. XD
Gosh you have a skill with writing and you can be sure I am checking your profile for more stories after submitting this review.
Thank you SO much for writing this and I wonder truly how you can write anything better than this in a sequel (because in my opinion sequels should be better than the first) but I believe that you can do something amazing so I encourage you to write! Whatever it is, just write! :D
Thanks for writing this, truly. It made my night.
6/7/2012 c1 kissmyballoons
I honestly had to stop in the middle of reading this, just to roll around my bed, because it was to cute.
I honestly had to stop in the middle of reading this, just to roll around my bed, because it was to cute.
4/8/2012 c1 e.n.black
Rated: Cute for the characters, their interaction, and my enjoyment of reading.
Rated: Cute for the characters, their interaction, and my enjoyment of reading.
2/23/2012 c1 someplacenice
This is possibly the best one shot I've ever read, it's absolutely adorable and really realistic. Amazing character forming, also. Well done on this awesome story! :D
This is possibly the best one shot I've ever read, it's absolutely adorable and really realistic. Amazing character forming, also. Well done on this awesome story! :D
12/11/2011 c1
2HelloBilby
Ahh! This is so gorgeous and I love it! It's left me with a warm happy feeling after reading it.
I wish I knew how to write reviews properly so I could tell you how amazing it is - even though you've already been told 118 times in the 4 years since you wrote it.

Ahh! This is so gorgeous and I love it! It's left me with a warm happy feeling after reading it.
I wish I knew how to write reviews properly so I could tell you how amazing it is - even though you've already been told 118 times in the 4 years since you wrote it.
11/23/2011 c1
3Let's See If It Moves
Wow! This was reaslistic, not too sappy, wasn't all about the romance and had well-drawn chrachters! Well done!
Baaaaa,
Ewe.

Wow! This was reaslistic, not too sappy, wasn't all about the romance and had well-drawn chrachters! Well done!
Baaaaa,
Ewe.
9/8/2011 c1 anonymous
I really like this story! You should defidently make a sequel!
I really like this story! You should defidently make a sequel!
7/9/2011 c1 Neko6892
Yes sequel! Or is there already a sequel? =D I definitely wanna see more of this stupid couple,haha. Thanks for writing this fic,I loved it. It gives you this warm fuzzy feeling inside.=)
Yes sequel! Or is there already a sequel? =D I definitely wanna see more of this stupid couple,haha. Thanks for writing this fic,I loved it. It gives you this warm fuzzy feeling inside.=)
7/3/2011 c1
1the clayer
I adore this. I actually do. To give you a little snapshot into the life of just another human being reading something you've created, it's 3.12am and I've spent the last hour taking this story in with a little silly smile. I've got to get up for college at 6am. And this was completely worth the zombie I'm going to be in a few hours. Absolutely adorable. I'm watching this space x

I adore this. I actually do. To give you a little snapshot into the life of just another human being reading something you've created, it's 3.12am and I've spent the last hour taking this story in with a little silly smile. I've got to get up for college at 6am. And this was completely worth the zombie I'm going to be in a few hours. Absolutely adorable. I'm watching this space x