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4/29/2009 c1 123mobman
wow...

im confused.

Do I laugh... or simply smile?

Mob
8/24/2008 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
Oh... my... God! I love it! This was sadistically hilarious!
10/16/2007 c1 luv me like no other
just a little disturbing, eh?

haha, i liked it anyway, especially the last line, it was kinda unexpected. thought that main body was more like S&M stuff, rather than killing someone.
7/17/2007 c1 48R. Louise
Is it wrong to say that this made me laugh?

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The last line just took me by surprise. (You'd think the title would be sufficient warning.)

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Still loving it,

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R. Louise
3/3/2007 c1 12Bananas in a Blender
Ew. Nice imagery, but... ew. For some reason, I think of Phantom of the Opera.

Great job, though. I liked the title and idea for this poem.
2/27/2007 c1 63lackluster
nice tone with the sharp imagery and wording, especially the beginning(it really sets the mood for the rest of the poem). it's vague and strange and yet i love it.

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