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4/29/2009 c1 123mobman

im confused.

Do I laugh... or simply smile?

8/24/2008 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
Oh... my... God! I love it! This was sadistically hilarious!
10/16/2007 c1 luv me like no other
just a little disturbing, eh?

haha, i liked it anyway, especially the last line, it was kinda unexpected. thought that main body was more like S&M stuff, rather than killing someone.
7/17/2007 c1 48R. Louise
Is it wrong to say that this made me laugh?


The last line just took me by surprise. (You'd think the title would be sufficient warning.)


Still loving it,


R. Louise
3/3/2007 c1 12Bananas in a Blender
Ew. Nice imagery, but... ew. For some reason, I think of Phantom of the Opera.

Great job, though. I liked the title and idea for this poem.
2/27/2007 c1 63lackluster
nice tone with the sharp imagery and wording, especially the beginning(it really sets the mood for the rest of the poem). it's vague and strange and yet i love it.

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