for The Deadly Flower4/9/2007 c6 ham3
Hi Carm!
Your story is awesome! Interesting, romantic, and a little funny at some points. I hope to see more romance, or just answers about what’s going on.
Thanks so much for reviewing my work! Your comments were very nice.
Hi Carm!
Your story is awesome! Interesting, romantic, and a little funny at some points. I hope to see more romance, or just answers about what’s going on.
Thanks so much for reviewing my work! Your comments were very nice.
4/9/2007 c2 
32Ammom
Ahh, Vanessa Carlton, a good artist. I thought Paint it Black might have given you an idea for a vampire story, but that doesn't seem to be the case. Anyhow, I do like the chapter, and I love her name, Dahlia.
32AmmomAhh, Vanessa Carlton, a good artist. I thought Paint it Black might have given you an idea for a vampire story, but that doesn't seem to be the case. Anyhow, I do like the chapter, and I love her name, Dahlia.
4/9/2007 c5 1HighOnAirGurl
i loved the beginning to this! i thought it was really happening... nice twist there. and i like the plot development and the honor you put into the convos. really really really good job.
1HighOnAirGurli loved the beginning to this! i thought it was really happening... nice twist there. and i like the plot development and the honor you put into the convos. really really really good job.
4/9/2007 c4 HighOnAirGurl
really nice descriptions. i felt like i was right there in the cafe with dahlia and knightly. oh...knightly and dahlia! i get it! theyre going to get together? i hope so. youve made them fit.
really nice descriptions. i felt like i was right there in the cafe with dahlia and knightly. oh...knightly and dahlia! i get it! theyre going to get together? i hope so. youve made them fit.
4/9/2007 c3 HighOnAirGurl
i like dahlia a lot. a lot a lot. shes got attitude but being in first person and all, you can tell shes gentle and loyal on the inside. very good characterizations.
i like dahlia a lot. a lot a lot. shes got attitude but being in first person and all, you can tell shes gentle and loyal on the inside. very good characterizations.
4/9/2007 c2 HighOnAirGurl
and the smile won out over the rest. a beautiful ending to a beautiful chapter.
and the smile won out over the rest. a beautiful ending to a beautiful chapter.
4/9/2007 c6 MM
as always...its a awsome chapter! and happy easter to you to!o chocolate bunnies...yummy. update soon coz a cliffie like that is gonna haunt me forever until you do MM
as always...its a awsome chapter! and happy easter to you to!o chocolate bunnies...yummy. update soon coz a cliffie like that is gonna haunt me forever until you do MM
4/8/2007 c6 4Loretta Grazie
cool chapter... ^_^ please update again... at least the action is picking up... thanks for this... ^_^
4Loretta Graziecool chapter... ^_^ please update again... at least the action is picking up... thanks for this... ^_^
4/8/2007 c6 21Faith Adeline
ahh I liked it! Ended too soon, a cliffy! lol, update as soon as you can and happy easter!
Faith
21Faith Adelineahh I liked it! Ended too soon, a cliffy! lol, update as soon as you can and happy easter!
Faith
4/8/2007 c6 Jorda
Aw, what happens next? I couldn't stop reading and then it was just over.. Hope you update soon. Good job! :)
Aw, what happens next? I couldn't stop reading and then it was just over.. Hope you update soon. Good job! :)
4/8/2007 c6 14CK Shorty
So far, I love each and every character. Aw...Will having a crush on Dahlia but she may not return those feelings? That's always a sucky situation. Well, waiting patiently for the next chapter :o] Very happy that I found this. And...curse you for the cliffhanger! Update as soon as you can :o]
14CK ShortySo far, I love each and every character. Aw...Will having a crush on Dahlia but she may not return those feelings? That's always a sucky situation. Well, waiting patiently for the next chapter :o] Very happy that I found this. And...curse you for the cliffhanger! Update as soon as you can :o]