for The Deadly Flower3/12/2007 c3 Ellea Dawn
Hm...pale...heals quickly...could Dahlia possibly be a vampyre?
You have an excellent flair for storytelling, and I look forward to reading more.
~Ellea Dawn
Hm...pale...heals quickly...could Dahlia possibly be a vampyre?
You have an excellent flair for storytelling, and I look forward to reading more.
~Ellea Dawn
3/11/2007 c3 KrazyFrog100
Damn. This is like reading the best book ever. You've got everything down pat. Emotions, characters, flow, writing skills, depth. Love it.
Damn. This is like reading the best book ever. You've got everything down pat. Emotions, characters, flow, writing skills, depth. Love it.
3/11/2007 c2 KrazyFrog100
I love the characters! Will is so nice! and Dahlia...I wanna be like her when I grow up XD
I love the characters! Will is so nice! and Dahlia...I wanna be like her when I grow up XD
3/9/2007 c2 
13xtotallyatpeacex
Hey! This looks really good so far. So, is it Will who saved/turned her in order for her to live? I mean, she has to be turned by now in order to make such a quick recovery, right? Anyways, good job, update again soon! :D
13xtotallyatpeacexHey! This looks really good so far. So, is it Will who saved/turned her in order for her to live? I mean, she has to be turned by now in order to make such a quick recovery, right? Anyways, good job, update again soon! :D
3/8/2007 c2 2divinexglory
Hey, our stories have some similarities! This is interesting; I wonder when the vampires are gonna come in. Wonder what Will did to lose Dahlia's trust. Hmm. Update! =)
2divinexgloryHey, our stories have some similarities! This is interesting; I wonder when the vampires are gonna come in. Wonder what Will did to lose Dahlia's trust. Hmm. Update! =)
3/3/2007 c2 Lady Silver fang
Another good chapter. Update soon *gives puppy dog eyes* Pwlease..I'll give you a cookie..*holds out cookie*
Another good chapter. Update soon *gives puppy dog eyes* Pwlease..I'll give you a cookie..*holds out cookie*
3/3/2007 c1 Lady Silver fang
I must say this is very interesting. I'm surprised you only have four reviews for it. O_O People are just stupid when it comes to not finding a good story. Keep up the good work and...*blinks as she notices Chapter one* Whoops another chapter lol.
I must say this is very interesting. I'm surprised you only have four reviews for it. O_O People are just stupid when it comes to not finding a good story. Keep up the good work and...*blinks as she notices Chapter one* Whoops another chapter lol.
3/3/2007 c2 MM
oh wow...your like a professional author! i couldnt stop reading! i like it cuz its deep, but its funny, but its real...ok, yeah. i love it. more son!MM
oh wow...your like a professional author! i couldnt stop reading! i like it cuz its deep, but its funny, but its real...ok, yeah. i love it. more son!MM
2/28/2007 c1 HarveysGirl
Excellent. More.
Excellent. More.
2/27/2007 c1 MM
im hooked. i loved the ending. who is it? please update soon! MM
im hooked. i loved the ending. who is it? please update soon! MM