for A Dead Sparrow on the Street5/2/2017 c1 
46CorkyBookworm1
This is an interesting piece. The imagery is vivid and I loved the tidbit about the seasons. I also really enjoyed the scattered repetition of the title. Certainly thoughtful.
46CorkyBookworm1This is an interesting piece. The imagery is vivid and I loved the tidbit about the seasons. I also really enjoyed the scattered repetition of the title. Certainly thoughtful.
4/22/2017 c1 14DemigodessOfEternity
Lovely but sad. Touching in the way you consider it's "life" as an object.
14DemigodessOfEternityLovely but sad. Touching in the way you consider it's "life" as an object.
11/10/2016 c1 1gabbygirl199
What a thought prevoking poem it made think of all the times that i had walked passed a poor sad lonely animal that had died in and around me it made me want to cry for the sorrow of them just being left to rot, without anyone to mourn for their lost lives
1gabbygirl199What a thought prevoking poem it made think of all the times that i had walked passed a poor sad lonely animal that had died in and around me it made me want to cry for the sorrow of them just being left to rot, without anyone to mourn for their lost lives
9/14/2010 c1 theamazinghobit
The use of words and structuring in this piece is brilliant and precise. It grasps the loneliness of the little sparrow's death by revealing how its surroundings are affected or in this case 'unaffected' after its death, leaving me with a great deal of sympathy. I especially like the repeated "There's a dead sparrow on the street". Somehow, it acts as a reminder that the sparrow is gone yet at the same time, it doesn't seem to matter as life and earth are still functioning and undisturbed. It makes me wonder, is dieing the scary part..or is it scariest when no one and nothing seems to be affected after our death?
A great piece, great job!
The use of words and structuring in this piece is brilliant and precise. It grasps the loneliness of the little sparrow's death by revealing how its surroundings are affected or in this case 'unaffected' after its death, leaving me with a great deal of sympathy. I especially like the repeated "There's a dead sparrow on the street". Somehow, it acts as a reminder that the sparrow is gone yet at the same time, it doesn't seem to matter as life and earth are still functioning and undisturbed. It makes me wonder, is dieing the scary part..or is it scariest when no one and nothing seems to be affected after our death?
A great piece, great job!
2/27/2007 c1 22BeliefInSquirells
Theres a dead bird on my road where i walk everyday.
After reading this i'll probably cry when i see it.
Beautiful, touching, melancholy.
22BeliefInSquirellsTheres a dead bird on my road where i walk everyday.
After reading this i'll probably cry when i see it.
Beautiful, touching, melancholy.