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3/30/2007 c1 32Leong Seng Chee
very well writen, and can totally imagine it being sung at the funeral. very nice indeed. hats off to u on this
3/22/2007 c1 A.K.Alloren
I really really like this. There's a distinct rythym to it that's very alluring, and if I wanted to go a little bit overboard on the analyzation I would say that it reminds me of waves against a ship hull or the shore. I like the fact that you actually have a vocabulary, which is such a breath of fresh air compared to those writers who are still using kindergarten words. Fantastic job!
3/2/2007 c1 1Kessa Queen of Night
I really like it, very haunting.
3/1/2007 c1 59radioactive stanica
I really love this one! My brother was a sailor. Anyway, I am going to add this to my C2!

Best Wishes!

TSP
3/1/2007 c1 58ChildeOfChaos
Wow, this is really good. I especially liked the last three lines.
3/1/2007 c1 2orangeknerry
one word WOW
2/28/2007 c1 83the-foresight
That was really good, I get bored of this site sometimes because I can't find anything that I like. But I did like this, the issue of death applied in a really unique way and reminded me of Coleridge's Ancient Mariner. Good work.

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