for Mon Fantome8/8/2007 c11 
6Carmel March
As always, fantastic job. I like how you're keeping the lighthearted parts in there as everything is becoming more and more complex. Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchAs always, fantastic job. I like how you're keeping the lighthearted parts in there as everything is becoming more and more complex. Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!
~Carm~
8/7/2007 c4 4Raul P. Samuels
This chapter wasn't as interesting as the others. At least the end wasn't. But the beginning was really good.
4Raul P. SamuelsThis chapter wasn't as interesting as the others. At least the end wasn't. But the beginning was really good.
8/7/2007 c10 6Carmel March
Lovely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. And the characters seem to be developing even more. Their feelings and emotions are changing and emerging, making them more realistic, believable characters. Very nicely done :) Update as soon as you can!
~carm~
6Carmel MarchLovely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. And the characters seem to be developing even more. Their feelings and emotions are changing and emerging, making them more realistic, believable characters. Very nicely done :) Update as soon as you can!
~carm~
5/12/2007 c9 Carmel March
Wonderful chapter. It really displayed your talent for storytelling and your expertise with dialogue. This story is simply amazing :)
~carm~
Wonderful chapter. It really displayed your talent for storytelling and your expertise with dialogue. This story is simply amazing :)
~carm~
4/28/2007 c8 Carmel March
Hmm. There are so many words to describe this chapter. Words like suburb, wonderful, fantastic, excellent, super duper, great, perfection, and, my personal favourite, groovy. What I think I'm trying to say is...I loved it and I can't wait for more!
~carM~
Hmm. There are so many words to describe this chapter. Words like suburb, wonderful, fantastic, excellent, super duper, great, perfection, and, my personal favourite, groovy. What I think I'm trying to say is...I loved it and I can't wait for more!
~carM~
3/16/2007 c7 Carmel March
Excellent chapter! I loved it! Thanks for updating so soon :) Hope to see more!
~carm~
Excellent chapter! I loved it! Thanks for updating so soon :) Hope to see more!
~carm~
3/14/2007 c6 Carmel March
YAY! You updated! I was so happy when I saw the alert in my inbox :) Awesome chapter, by the way! I loved it! Can't wait for more!
~carm~
YAY! You updated! I was so happy when I saw the alert in my inbox :) Awesome chapter, by the way! I loved it! Can't wait for more!
~carm~
3/12/2007 c5 Carmel March
Hello hello! More wonderful chapters! This story is amazing. I loved the scooby-doo bandaid line. Hehe! I laughed merely thinking about it :) Keep it up!
~carm~
Hello hello! More wonderful chapters! This story is amazing. I loved the scooby-doo bandaid line. Hehe! I laughed merely thinking about it :) Keep it up!
~carm~
3/9/2007 c1 Carmel March
Hey! Excellent first chapter! I like it and I can't wait for more! Update soon!
~carm~
Hey! Excellent first chapter! I like it and I can't wait for more! Update soon!
~carm~