for Stay4/5/2007 c1 
1shairimean
Aww really sweet and chaste, I loved it. I loved how it was written and how it had that sort of angst factor to it but realy was really sweet.
I liked how you didn't load it down with any unnecessary things but just wrote it as it was. I really liked it- it was very nice.
The reason I read this story was because I was looking through you profile and I was like, yeah, she's really interesting and hey, she likes the same things that I do. It was the miduhyo that clinched it for me really.
Anyway, yeah, back to the story it was very nicely done. I like the fact that you've hinted at romance but didn't let it become a main factor in the one shot, even though I am a 'hopeless romantic'- if we want to get back to basics. So thats great.
1shairimeanAww really sweet and chaste, I loved it. I loved how it was written and how it had that sort of angst factor to it but realy was really sweet.
I liked how you didn't load it down with any unnecessary things but just wrote it as it was. I really liked it- it was very nice.
The reason I read this story was because I was looking through you profile and I was like, yeah, she's really interesting and hey, she likes the same things that I do. It was the miduhyo that clinched it for me really.
Anyway, yeah, back to the story it was very nicely done. I like the fact that you've hinted at romance but didn't let it become a main factor in the one shot, even though I am a 'hopeless romantic'- if we want to get back to basics. So thats great.
3/4/2007 c1 A.A-H.L
aw! this was such a sweet story; I liked it very much and I loved you you gave their history, it made it so much more romantic. ^.^ wonderful job
aw! this was such a sweet story; I liked it very much and I loved you you gave their history, it made it so much more romantic. ^.^ wonderful job
3/3/2007 c1 3I Quoth Nevermore
Aw! This was cute. I like how you left the ending slightly undone. Like, he took off his shoes, so he remembered that, but you didn't write if they got together (aka dated or something) and left that to the reader's imagination. Very well written!
3I Quoth NevermoreAw! This was cute. I like how you left the ending slightly undone. Like, he took off his shoes, so he remembered that, but you didn't write if they got together (aka dated or something) and left that to the reader's imagination. Very well written!
3/3/2007 c1 90lovelaced
That was really good, I wish that it wasn't a one-shot but I loved it!
Great job:)
~Sapphire
90lovelacedThat was really good, I wish that it wasn't a one-shot but I loved it!
Great job:)
~Sapphire
3/3/2007 c1 1ConsistentlyxInconsistent
OMG that was such a good story. I wish it wasn't a one shot though because this would make a better story if it were longer. Other than a few spelling errors here and there it was awesome!
1ConsistentlyxInconsistentOMG that was such a good story. I wish it wasn't a one shot though because this would make a better story if it were longer. Other than a few spelling errors here and there it was awesome!
3/3/2007 c1 16mex.chika
WOWness! *gosh* lol...how could you put me in your profile*giggles of excitment and fear* lol Great story as always! lol you hyper? lol
16mex.chikaWOWness! *gosh* lol...how could you put me in your profile*giggles of excitment and fear* lol Great story as always! lol you hyper? lol
3/3/2007 c1 10sweet vanilla mint
I love how you started the story with a quote from Nemo. Hahaha... :) it's cute! Thinking of writing a sequel? It'll be nice if you would. (But maybe that's just because I like sappy, fluffy endings. Hahaha!) I love your story as it is, though. :)
10sweet vanilla mintI love how you started the story with a quote from Nemo. Hahaha... :) it's cute! Thinking of writing a sequel? It'll be nice if you would. (But maybe that's just because I like sappy, fluffy endings. Hahaha!) I love your story as it is, though. :)
3/3/2007 c1 6xx raincharm fetish xx
Aw, that was...wow, I don't know how to describe it. Moving sounds like the best word. And real. Bittersweet. Amazing job, I honestly hope you continue writing! hehe and I like one-shots, too... ^-^
If that was inspired by a personal experience, I hope your friend and yourself are still close. :]
6xx raincharm fetish xxAw, that was...wow, I don't know how to describe it. Moving sounds like the best word. And real. Bittersweet. Amazing job, I honestly hope you continue writing! hehe and I like one-shots, too... ^-^
If that was inspired by a personal experience, I hope your friend and yourself are still close. :]
3/3/2007 c1 7J.M. Raconteur
This is a very intriguing story, and I must say I like it quite a bit. I especially appreciate the realistic portrayal of the growth friendships undergo from acquaintances to best friends to...even more. This really is a gorgeous story.
7J.M. RaconteurThis is a very intriguing story, and I must say I like it quite a bit. I especially appreciate the realistic portrayal of the growth friendships undergo from acquaintances to best friends to...even more. This really is a gorgeous story.