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10/21/2007 c1 94AK the Twilight
I used to wear braces. I know how it is to feel unchained. Good, though rather short. The whole "bars are coming off the hinge" phrase is interesting, but it feels a bit forced and distracting. The rest though is very good. I can see that there isn't too much to say, but this is pretty light-hearted and enjoyable. Great job.
8/30/2007 c1 24xLilyx
This is oddly amusing, i like it! I remember how much i hated my braces, ended up binning them, now have veneers instead lol I like the way its all a sort of metaphor for jail. :)
4/1/2007 c1 His Mercy's Waiting
^^ That's really cute! I love how you compared braces to jail bars. Excellent creativity.

Keep writing!
3/17/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
Goodness, I wish that were me! I still have my braces. As a matter of fact, they just put two more on! It hurts so bad! But I'm happy for you. Maybe one day I'll be free too.
3/10/2007 c1 46antigonelives
Braces are EVIL, I tell you.
3/10/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
I like this piece a lot! It makes me remember wearing braces (I hated those things) I love the last 2 lines. Great job and keep writing!

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