for Dark4/6/2007 c1 Levodoom
This was a good read, really enjoyed it. Usually I ain't that much for poems, but this was well written. Keep up the good work!
This was a good read, really enjoyed it. Usually I ain't that much for poems, but this was well written. Keep up the good work!
3/8/2007 c1 
11TragicDreams
I really liked it! It didn't seem like the ryhmes were forced at all and it flowed beautifully. Thanks for the review by the way.
11TragicDreamsI really liked it! It didn't seem like the ryhmes were forced at all and it flowed beautifully. Thanks for the review by the way.
3/5/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Good rhythm and I quite like how you use 'fierce' as a noun. In ome places, such as "The darkness, it had swallowed me" and "Something brushed against me then"-actually there are quite a few-need periods to end them. Without the summar I would not have guessed the moral, but I guess that's ok. Nice imagery and wording.
65NemonusGood rhythm and I quite like how you use 'fierce' as a noun. In ome places, such as "The darkness, it had swallowed me" and "Something brushed against me then"-actually there are quite a few-need periods to end them. Without the summar I would not have guessed the moral, but I guess that's ok. Nice imagery and wording.