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4/6/2007 c1 Levodoom
This was a good read, really enjoyed it. Usually I ain't that much for poems, but this was well written. Keep up the good work!
3/8/2007 c1 11TragicDreams
I really liked it! It didn't seem like the ryhmes were forced at all and it flowed beautifully. Thanks for the review by the way.
3/5/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Good rhythm and I quite like how you use 'fierce' as a noun. In ome places, such as "The darkness, it had swallowed me" and "Something brushed against me then"-actually there are quite a few-need periods to end them. Without the summar I would not have guessed the moral, but I guess that's ok. Nice imagery and wording.
3/4/2007 c1 7Wir1wind0001
dam... this is really good! i love it...keep up the goos work

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