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8/23/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
"I will her many"-Ah, these don't make sense. Do you mean hear instead of her?

Nice poem. It made me smile.

Thanks for the review of "Places I Thought I Would Never Go". I really appreciate it.

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~
3/10/2007 c1 46antigonelives
Not a bad poem, but the bold text made it harder to read than it should have been. "My store will be like none else"... that last part should be, "like no one else's."

~Cristina

PS: Good thing that you have dreams! I hope you succeed! :)
3/10/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
Very nice poem! I hope it becomes a reality someday! Good job and keep writing!

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