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3/6/2007 c1 waiting for validation
Whoa...great work. Your first review liked the "hold hands" line; so did I. I really like how you got everything to fit together into one theme, though I haven't found that theme yet. My particular favorite line is "we're swallowed by the solar waves"; I just liked that one for some reason. Keep writing.

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3/5/2007 c1 306Ashelin
I loved this. I don't exactly know why, but I did. I especially loved "maybe on clear nights we can hold hands." And the last two lines. Great job!

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