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3/30/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
I love the metaphor, and the "itsaddingup itsaddingup".

I, too, adore the last two lines.

Good work.
3/10/2007 c1 24heroin zombie
Good ending, but I didn't like when you gummed words together.
3/8/2007 c1 zz00
Nice. The italic lines really make time feel as ephemeral as water. Nice metaphor at the end; gives the impression of someone who's too afraid to act. And thanks for the review.
3/7/2007 c1 polka dots and addictions
LOVE the last two lines, & this begins with a gorgeous comparison & its been extended well.nicely written. ~Bex xx

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