for A Quick Bite1/28/2010 c3 Devilish Kisses
Ha ha, Thea reminds me of one of my very good friends! I also have a friend who enjoys dying her hair interesting (read: questionable) colours and enjoys probing and analyzing every part of my life.
Ha ha, Thea reminds me of one of my very good friends! I also have a friend who enjoys dying her hair interesting (read: questionable) colours and enjoys probing and analyzing every part of my life.
1/28/2010 c1 Devilish Kisses
You know, I absolutely love authors who write about hot werewolves and sexy vampires! Thank you so much! This Alejandro guy is definitely dark and dangerous!
You know, I absolutely love authors who write about hot werewolves and sexy vampires! Thank you so much! This Alejandro guy is definitely dark and dangerous!
11/10/2009 c1 esssjay
i thought i'd written a review for this story but then i checked my history and found i hadn't, so i decided to come back and write one. this is by far the best vampire story that i've read on fp yet. and before you think that this is the first one i've come across, let me tell you it isn't, but without a doubt it's fantabulous.
very quickly i became extremely attached to your writing style. i particularly like how you structured each chapter, with the literature extracts and journal entries that made up the start of each one. even when they weren't signed (the entries i mean) i was able to comprehend who was writing and what the following chapter would entail. i also liked how it gave brief snippets of the story in the other characters' prespectives.
often, the first person narration doesn't come off as sophisticated as third person, but you certainly pulled it off.
i'm also really picky with grammatical errors and the like, but i found virtually none, which i was EXTREMELY pleased about. it's not too often you come across a story on fp that has perfect grammar and spelling and is practically perfect.
i really liked this story. the only thing that was a bit disappointing for me was that i was able to easily figure out what was going on whenever there were plot twists and surprises. although that probably isn't a fault on your part, more so mine in the sense that i'm known for being quite perceptive. regardless of this minor detail, i was still continuously eager to read on and find out what was going to happen, no matter how clued in i was.
i thoroughly enjoyed every minute of reading this story. i'm onto the sequel at the moment, so expect another review from me real soon. thanks heaps for this awesome read. it was so entertaining.
jess
i thought i'd written a review for this story but then i checked my history and found i hadn't, so i decided to come back and write one. this is by far the best vampire story that i've read on fp yet. and before you think that this is the first one i've come across, let me tell you it isn't, but without a doubt it's fantabulous.
very quickly i became extremely attached to your writing style. i particularly like how you structured each chapter, with the literature extracts and journal entries that made up the start of each one. even when they weren't signed (the entries i mean) i was able to comprehend who was writing and what the following chapter would entail. i also liked how it gave brief snippets of the story in the other characters' prespectives.
often, the first person narration doesn't come off as sophisticated as third person, but you certainly pulled it off.
i'm also really picky with grammatical errors and the like, but i found virtually none, which i was EXTREMELY pleased about. it's not too often you come across a story on fp that has perfect grammar and spelling and is practically perfect.
i really liked this story. the only thing that was a bit disappointing for me was that i was able to easily figure out what was going on whenever there were plot twists and surprises. although that probably isn't a fault on your part, more so mine in the sense that i'm known for being quite perceptive. regardless of this minor detail, i was still continuously eager to read on and find out what was going to happen, no matter how clued in i was.
i thoroughly enjoyed every minute of reading this story. i'm onto the sequel at the moment, so expect another review from me real soon. thanks heaps for this awesome read. it was so entertaining.
jess
10/27/2009 c26 Chocorange888
I'm glad that I read this story, it's quite nice to read a story set in England once in a while and not the usual American culture that comes through in most pieces on Fictionpress. Thank you very much, it was a facinating read.
I'm glad that I read this story, it's quite nice to read a story set in England once in a while and not the usual American culture that comes through in most pieces on Fictionpress. Thank you very much, it was a facinating read.
10/7/2009 c27 jamimi04
I really enjoyed your story, it was very descriptive and held my attention from start to finish.
I really enjoyed your story, it was very descriptive and held my attention from start to finish.
9/13/2009 c1 
1MahinaMoon
You've won the award for most original circumstances surrounding a turning. Trapped in an elevator? Really?
Absolutely brilliant.
1MahinaMoonYou've won the award for most original circumstances surrounding a turning. Trapped in an elevator? Really?
Absolutely brilliant.
8/26/2009 c27 melores
BRILLIANT. I really loved how you made Lexie confess her love later in the story. Sometimes when the main character confesses true love too early in the story, I feel like there's no point in reading the story since they've already fallen in love. BUT! With yours, it really captured my heart and this is one of my very favourite original vampire stories. Great job! I know I'll be reading the sequel! :)
BRILLIANT. I really loved how you made Lexie confess her love later in the story. Sometimes when the main character confesses true love too early in the story, I feel like there's no point in reading the story since they've already fallen in love. BUT! With yours, it really captured my heart and this is one of my very favourite original vampire stories. Great job! I know I'll be reading the sequel! :)
8/23/2009 c1 6iantoniali
Awesome way to start a story. I'm helplessly in love with it already!
/Bella
6iantonialiAwesome way to start a story. I'm helplessly in love with it already!
/Bella
8/18/2009 c1 blahbookblah
Good first chapter. [: It kept me interested. And the whole idea of being stuck in a lift was different than anything I've ever read. So, thank you for your creativity.
Good first chapter. [: It kept me interested. And the whole idea of being stuck in a lift was different than anything I've ever read. So, thank you for your creativity.