for But Mommy How?3/8/2007 c1 
14D. A. Emme
Nice twist on things at the end. Well written. Uhm, in the first stanza, I think you made a typo it says 'When if Daddy's home, he's mean and drunk.' The when if daddy's home part doesn't make much sense. But other than that I like this poem. Keep up the good work.
14D. A. EmmeNice twist on things at the end. Well written. Uhm, in the first stanza, I think you made a typo it says 'When if Daddy's home, he's mean and drunk.' The when if daddy's home part doesn't make much sense. But other than that I like this poem. Keep up the good work.