for r e g r e t s11/22/2009 c1 
3x alacrity
I'm not really a fan of rhyming poems, but this one is very abruptedly wonderful. I love the last part, very unexpected and keeps you thinking on in a way..
3x alacrityI'm not really a fan of rhyming poems, but this one is very abruptedly wonderful. I love the last part, very unexpected and keeps you thinking on in a way..
3/8/2007 c1 29Little Crayon
*.* Purdy! I love the use of spacing to make the most important parts emphasized. n.n Great job, hun.
29Little Crayon*.* Purdy! I love the use of spacing to make the most important parts emphasized. n.n Great job, hun.
3/8/2007 c1 14D. A. Emme
Good poem. Though, I'm not quite sure what it's about, I liked this poem. The structure, the words, and just how you came about writing it. Keep writing.
14D. A. EmmeGood poem. Though, I'm not quite sure what it's about, I liked this poem. The structure, the words, and just how you came about writing it. Keep writing.