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3/8/2007 c1 46antigonelives
"Ripping Ripping out the heart

Watching blood drip down the drain -

Falling falling through the dark

The bright soul now is slain."

I adore this stanza and especially your use of inversion in the last line here. This flows exceptionally well and the meaning is something to which I relate.

Awesome job!

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