for Being7/21/2008 c1 
102The Hippie Nerd
A really good piece, and most definitely relatable. I really like how it's formed, starting rather mysteriously and vague and coming to a great ending with the title itself. "It's hardly a feeling / It's more / Being" is a great line (or lines, rather). There's a darkness to the piece, it's also very honest. I like how all the lines are rather short, and seem to grow shorter as you reach the end. It gives the poem itself a feeling as if it's falling. Good job!
102The Hippie NerdA really good piece, and most definitely relatable. I really like how it's formed, starting rather mysteriously and vague and coming to a great ending with the title itself. "It's hardly a feeling / It's more / Being" is a great line (or lines, rather). There's a darkness to the piece, it's also very honest. I like how all the lines are rather short, and seem to grow shorter as you reach the end. It gives the poem itself a feeling as if it's falling. Good job!
4/19/2007 c1 14FreakierThanThou
Wow. That's an interesting take on life. I loved the end, you really know how to pack a literary punch. And the part about describing it was just great.
Keep writing,
-Freaky
14FreakierThanThouWow. That's an interesting take on life. I loved the end, you really know how to pack a literary punch. And the part about describing it was just great.
Keep writing,
-Freaky