for Dirty Lies3/9/2007 c1 
174Victor Joseph
hehehe gossipers suck.
i liked this, but i felt like you could have gone a bit further with it. the repitition was nice, but it took up space where you could have gone into what the lies were or what the guy was like. but regardless, not bad at all
174Victor Josephhehehe gossipers suck.
i liked this, but i felt like you could have gone a bit further with it. the repitition was nice, but it took up space where you could have gone into what the lies were or what the guy was like. but regardless, not bad at all
3/8/2007 c1 2merissala
Whoever spread gossip about that guy you like must be really jealous... and immature to be spreading gossip. I like to laugh at the people who do that, because I know, whatever they say, I won't believe until it comes out of the person's mouth. (The person they are gossiping about)
Agreeable Poem, definitely.
2merissalaWhoever spread gossip about that guy you like must be really jealous... and immature to be spreading gossip. I like to laugh at the people who do that, because I know, whatever they say, I won't believe until it comes out of the person's mouth. (The person they are gossiping about)
Agreeable Poem, definitely.