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5/29/2007 c1 His Mercy's Waiting
Good message, but there was something bland in the way you presented it. Add some uniqueness and spark.

Your best line: "We're monkeys at play."

Keep writing!
3/10/2007 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
I really love this poem! You did a really great job with the emotion and it flows nicely. Excellent work! Keep it up!

Love ya,

-Becca
3/10/2007 c1 174a silenced revolution
Cute and sweet :)

~Hazellin

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