for natural selection2/25/2008 c1 
4Mary Chrys
Well, that is certainly a lovely way to describe life. You know ho I describe it? "Blech." Your way is much better. "A daisy among roses..." that is so true and I think that's how just about every sane girl feels. That's how I feel anyway. And for your touching review: thanks.
4Mary ChrysWell, that is certainly a lovely way to describe life. You know ho I describe it? "Blech." Your way is much better. "A daisy among roses..." that is so true and I think that's how just about every sane girl feels. That's how I feel anyway. And for your touching review: thanks.
4/1/2007 c1 612simpleplan13
I love this metaphor and the title is awesome... the ending is great too... well done
612simpleplan13I love this metaphor and the title is awesome... the ending is great too... well done
3/15/2007 c1 88Icthoid Matro Coselos
omgosh, this is awesome! imagery, the rythm.. I liked your alusion to Eden! the clearly bitter taste when you bite into this poem seems... wholesome?-like bitter, filling bread- it's just enough meat to make it a beautiful creation... that's so beautiful!(p.s.) thanks for the reveiw!
88Icthoid Matro Coselosomgosh, this is awesome! imagery, the rythm.. I liked your alusion to Eden! the clearly bitter taste when you bite into this poem seems... wholesome?-like bitter, filling bread- it's just enough meat to make it a beautiful creation... that's so beautiful!(p.s.) thanks for the reveiw!